Profile Review Request

That is better, but I still think this line - "I'm looking for connections exciting and professional people..." should be "I'm looking for connections WITH exciting and professional people..."

You have a couple grammer issues and run on sentences. If you cut/paste the whole thing into a word processor (Google Docs is free) it will likely pull those out.

All of that said, I don't want to get your hopes up. It never hurts to have a good profile, but it isn't likely to make a huge difference. Your success could be as simple as a cougar just wants some Chinese food, as in Sum Yung Guy ;-)

I appreciate that advice Mayhem and have taken it to heart. I’ve revamped my entire bio if you don’t mind taking a look and telling me what you think, would be happy to work with your guys’ experience on the site in what types of traits are green and red flags in a SM.

Is your opening "Looking for:" sentence supposed to be -

I'm looking for connections WITH like-minded ....?

Also, "like-minded" has no set definition so you're better off just saying what "like-minded" means to you and omit that term. The "Looking for:" section is a good place to define WHO you're looking for, which you have, and WHAT you would like to do with them if/when you find them, which you haven't. It doesn't need to be detailed, but as an example (MFMs with Hot Wives, an SF to attend parties with, etc.).

I know this is a site for people looking for sex, but most want a little more than just that. Your Description could be better by indicating what you like to do for fun aside from just sex. This lets people know if you have other common interests and gives you something to talk about before and after sex, unless you're just looking for NSA sex. If so, it's probably better to just say that, but having common interests will never hurt you.

Other than that, a lot of the usual advice applies, which you can get from reading any of the recommendations for just about any other person that has asked for input. For example, you don't need physical description info because that's what the pictures are for.

I appreciate your response, I’ll work on finding good replacements for those photos. Unfortunate but understandable about the reply rates here, as I’ve already seen too many horror stories about the messages some people already get and the general flakiness of first timers. Though, other than maybe Fetlife, I don’t think I’ve heard of any other spot that has this large of a swinger social gathering.

Well, the only thing I can see about your profile is that your first two pics are rather dark, and you can't really see them very well. As far as sending out messages to people and not getting a response, welcome to the norm on here. Count yourself lucky if you get a response of 1 out of 10 attempts and most probably that one won't go anywhere as the number of fakes on swinger web sites are increasing by the day.

Hello. I’m a single male and very new to the site, I was hoping to get a profile review please. I’ve sent out a good amount of introductory messages to interesting couples but haven’t received much in the way of responses yet, and I’m wondering if there’s a flag in my profile somewhere, if you don’t mind helping me out. Thanks!!