Updating my profile

So here's another take. The content of your profile sounds good, but like most of us could use a little polish. For one the all things to all people thing needs to go away. Be more specific what do you like to do outside the bedroom. Motorcycle, skiing, fishing, hunting, sports, your looking for a "partner" so you need more of a dating profile here.

That said your pictures are very poor quality on both lighting and resolution which makes me question how old they are? First thought was man this guy needs a new phone with a better camera...then it was oh maybe these were taken before the camera phone revolution of the last 4 years crap these are old photos. I myself don't get hung up on selfies verses others taking them for you, and I don't need to see you running a 5k , or anything else but the shirtless pic, a dressed nice pic, and keep smiling in your photos you have a great smile use that.

Good luck

I have to go for a run, but I can make this quick.

You need 3 core pictures:

A picture of you shirtless at the beach.

A picture of you dressed nicely in a suit or date clothes, preferably at nicer bar drinking something brown.

A picture of you doing something interesting like running a 5K or traveling.

None of these pictures can be selfies. If you feel uncomfortable or self-conscious asking someone to take your pictures, GET OVER IT.

Get those new pictures taken and repost so we can re-review.

So, you do have some obvious grammar issues happening with your profile which are easily correct in wp program. The biggest issue is that you are shopping for something that is super hard to find. If you are willing to play with couples as well as looking for a sf or partner in crime then put that in your profile as well. There are some hotwives who may join forces with you, however, it will help if you are direct in mentioning meetings couples.

You did make a swipe at creative prose but it doesn't come across well. It isn't too uncommon for men to try and write things that sound like they come from a novel. If you do it well then it might help. Done poorly it will just come across as humorous or would be a turn off.

Update your pictures. They look notably old. Look through the other posts and use Thelma's method and put up some new pictures. Burn the selfie that you have as your default pic.

I have to get in bed-I’ll do it tomorrow.

It would mean a lot if I could get some advice on how I can improve my profile.