Profile Feedback

Looks like you've change some things based upon some feedback here, which is great! Based upon what we can see now, we'll add that it's still confusing what your interests might be in single males and couple play. Opening line - soft swap only. With the single guys, too? If not penetration in the cum fantasies you describe, you should state that. Be explicit about which is which in those desires in your description. As a full swap couple, your profile is still a bit confusing to us regarding what's fair game and what is not. Not an indictment, but the profile does read a lot like she's being pushed along and you're describing things you want, vs. what she wants.

Thank you guys so much for the feedback! We’re definitely going to implement a lot of those suggestions!

I also was sure it was a single guy profile based on the user name.

There's nothing particularly wrong with your profile, but it's both very specific and written in such a narrow way that it's only going to attract a very small segment of the population, likely almost exclusively men.

If you want to attract couples and women, you might want to - as has been noted - up your photo game and tone down some of the sex, sex, sex aspect in favor of a more rounded appeal to others.

Good luck.

I think your profile is a bit off-putting because it concentrates only on sex and your physical appearance. I get very little sense of y'all as people.

Surely y'all have interests other than watching reality TV. Do you like cooking or trying new restaurants? Do you watch or participate in sports? Do you like boating, hiking or other outdoor activities? Or do you prefer indoor activities like dancing or working out? This information allows others to determine if there are any common interests. Most people assume there will be conversation before or after sex and common interests make conversation more enjoyable.

Try omitting references to your appearance - let your pictures show that, Velma has a great system for core pictures; remember also to smile, watch for clutter or visual chaos in the background and avoid selfies. Take pictures of each other - there is no good reason for individual selfies in your profile. As much as possible have others take pictures of you as a couple. If social distancing makes that difficult then see what you can do with a tripod and timer to avoid selfies.

You have stated rather clearly what you're looking for and the speed at which you hope to travel along this path. With a few tweaks the responses to your profile should improve.

Good luck and have fun!

~Phoebert's Wife

I opened a private gallery for you to see the kind of pictures you should have. My best suggestion is to keep your clothes on and keep it classy. But since you are primarily looking for single men, that doesn't mean much.

When I look at a profile, if I don't see pictures of the couple together, I get a little nervous that they aren't really a couple. So your first order of business needs to be getting a few pictures of the two of you together as a couple.

Now I need to talk about this line: "She wants to have her face covered in cum, and he wants to watch it happen"

As a woman... that kind of bothers me. I think that no woman on the planet actually likes it when a guy comes on her face, but I'm willing to admit that it's possible. I also don't like giving blowjobs, so I can see how I may be outside the norm. But you aren't really looking for couples, so again, this probably doesn't mean much.

This like kind of scares me too: "and she might secretly want to see him with another woman too."

So... she "might" secretly want to see him with another woman? Have you even talked? "Might?" I'm not going to see another couple on a "might."

To me, this is a huge red flag. I have this nagging feeling that she doesn't know this profile exists. Maybe I'm wrong, but if I see it as a red flag, others will as well. Something feels "off" about your profile. It reads like a guy's fantasy, not a profile that you sat down to write and discuss as a couple.

Honestly, it reads like the two of you went to a wedding, and she confessed to maybe wanting two guys at once when she had too much Moscato at the reception, and you turned it into this whole fantasy that now you are hoping to fulfill.

If you really have talked about this, I suggest you look at my private gallery and have some pictures taken of you as a couple.

Let's start with that. Then we can work on your profile text.

Heh well it's clear what you want. My only criticism is your profile name is rather lewd and aggressive - I get it from reading your profile but my first thought was that you were an aggressive single guy.

We put quite a bit of effort into our profile, but we’re still not completely happy with it. Can anyone offer some constructive criticism?