Too long?

Thank you for the feedback, we'll def take another read.

I don't think it's too long but I like to read. ;-)

Try reading it out loud - the reader should be the one that did not type the text - there's some odd phrasing in places and that's the best way to proofread for that. And perhaps adding some additional blank lines to break up longer paragraphs would help with readability

But it's so much better than most profiles - good job!

It is not too long. There are some minor grammar mistakes, but nothing extraordinary or that make us think English was not your first language.

If you have more advice we are listening thank you.

Hi. If your only question is whether your profile drags on too long, my answer would be no. That doesn't mean I don't think you could improve it though. I'm trying to be clear here, not snarky, in case you have doubts.

Just seeking some advice if our profile drags on too long. We'd like others to actually read to the end without losing interest. Thanks in advance for all the great suggestions & comments ahead of time.