Profile Review Request

Thanks so much for your guidance. I will remember to smile or at least grin during our next outing. We haven't been anywhere since these pictures were taken.

Hi. Definite improvement on multiple fronts. However, your face won't break if you give a full on grin. ;-)

Looking For is good, but I'd leave out FWB (and just that, because the rest of the sentence is fine) in what you have now and then add on another sentence saying you'd also like to explore FWB type encounters.

Description is good too, just fix the formatting errors and turn that into two paragraphs (the first three sentences are one and the last is on its own), with a blank line between them.

Fantasies is a good start, but please add in something similar for her. Not only is parity a good look, you want people to know that her fantasies are at least as important as his.

Additional comments is terrific, super clear and charming. Just change that to "dessert."

Nice job.

@goodgollynsmolly, thank you so much for the very insightful critique. It was very helpful and thorough. I did notice that the system doesn't accept emojis but there is a delay between the time you submit and when the mods approve and I hadn't got back in time to update. Most times I'm updating and checking on my phone and make simple errors. I did update the pictures with ones where I am smiling, sort of, lol. I'll remember to smile more often when I take picture. I did revise and hopefully clarified what we're looking for and our description. I tried to keep those sections short and simple. Please look over it again and comment. Ill be in front of my laptop this afternoon and should be able to make a more thorough revision.

Hi. It could be your messages, it could be unrealistic expectations of what should happen in the first 10 days you have a profile here. It could be some lack of clarity in your profile too.

Velma got a sticky for her photo advice for a reason - it's good - and you should listen to her. You should also have him smile in photos. There she is, all pretty and bubbly and he is...there. It's super important that men smile and that's even more true for giant guys. Smiles are connection and reassurance and one of the things that really attracts women. Men might do most of the work on here, but women are the ones who ultimately say yes or no.

Moving on, your tagline is trite. The two most common phrases in profiles are "don't be shy" and "we don't bite" and combining them just makes it worse. Please change it to something short and clever or short and sincere instead, something that makes people want to at least open your profile.

In Looking For, focus on the people you're looking for. I can't tell if the easy going couple is you or if you're looking for easy going couples and forgot to put the ess on the end of "couple." Either way, talk about who you're looking for and some of what you want (long term, fun, NSA, whatever) and not about you at all. That's for the other sections. And be definite about the whole thing. You're open to? Uh, fine, but it sounds like you have no actual interest in others when you put it that way. You also don't need to say you're open to advice, but if that's somehow important to you, put it in Additional comments instead.

In Description, you continue the formatting issue that starts in the previous section. Instead of disconnected sentences, write in paragraphs. Don't bother listing things that are already there, like height and weight. The rest is okay, although I don't get much of a sense of you, but you can't use emoji here. They aren't supported and just turn up as double question marks, which you should have noticed when you proofread your approved profile.

In Fantasies, you've managed to really confuse things and SammySings isn't the only one who doesn't know what you want. Are you interested in swapping and penetrative sex with others or just girl/girl and/or exhibitionism and voyeurism? Language matters and yours should be clearer.

What's in Additional comments now is okay, just uninteresting. It also mistakes the idea of your profile, which is to intrigue others enough to want to meet with you. So, keeping that in mind, can you see how inviting others to ask questions wouldn't do that?

Anyway, I hope that helps. I also hope you make changes and then come back for reviews. The responses can be breathtakingly blunt, but we all want you to succeed.

Good luck.

Also @velmaandshaggy, ill check out your galleries. Thanks!

Thanks for the input thus far guys. I'll revise to be more clear and I'll update the pictures.

I wasn't totally clear what you are into - watch and being watched, or watching her get pleasured, or up for anything?

It's not a bad profile... Read the sticky in the forum about the DEBauCH method. I also opened a private gallery to show you the kinds of picture you should have.

I really don't have anything negative to say. I think you are having trouble because you two are super new and it's the middle of the pandemic.

About the only piece of advice I have is to replace the picture #4 with a couples picture that is taken in the daytime. With your skin tone, you won't stand out against a black background. Keep that in mind when taking new pictures.

New to the lifestyle. Having a bit of trouble getting desired responses. I don't believe its looks or bad grammar, not sure what it is. Perhaps it's the wording of messages we send. Anyhow, please take a peek and make recommendations. Also, if you're nearby, and we tickle your fancy......?? We travel often to NY, NC, LA, and sometimes to MI.
-Art