Profile re-review

Yeah, SLS hates us, so the only "features" they add are the ones that cause irritation or are totally useless. Wait until you're totally done with your upgrades and get them approved and then go in and change your smoking and drinking toggles.

Typos:

In Looking For, it's experience in different situations and "we" are navigating

In Fantasies, put blank lines in between your paragraphs, there's a missing comma between "Who knows from there" and "since this is, etc."

In Additional comments, "If you like, etc.," should have a blank line separating it from the previous paragraph.

And that's it. Nice job on crafting a profile that makes you seem fun and approachable. Good luck in your new adventure!

I believe it's a recently added "feature"

The dreaded smoking/ drinking toggle strikes again!

Whenever you update the text in your profile, the sls gods have determined they will set your smoking and drinking preferences to say you only want people who drink and smoke.

You can change those without your profile going back through profile review.

AS far as I know, you can't move photos between galleries. You would need to re-upload.

The selfie of you two together is good. My suggestion would be to add a full-body pic of the two of you on the beach or dressed up for a night out. It's ok if you wait a few days to take this. What you have now looks pretty good.

I appreciate you all taking the time to review our profile and helping us make corrections.
Do you know if you can move photos between galleries?

Okay, I finally have a picture of us approved and in public pics

Much better. Now add a pic of you two together and you should see a better response rate.

Thank you goodgollymsmolly for the suggestions. I am still awaiting that picture of the two of us to be approved; should be on today.
As far as edits, I did the re-write on my phone. Will have to pull up on my laptop so I can get a good look. I appreciate you taking the time to help.

Thank you goodgollymsmolly for the suggestions. I am still awaiting that picture of the two of us to be approved; should be on today.
As far as edits, I did the re-write on my phone. Will have to pull up on my laptop so I can get a good look. I appreciate you taking the time to help.

I definitely think you're on the right track. Your profile is showing some personality, which is great. I might quibble at a few things - like thinking the second paragraph in Looking For belongs in the last section - but I think just reading it out loud to make sure it really sounds like you, fixing some of the spacing issues, and getting at least one good photo of the two of you together is probably going to be enough.

Good luck!