Please look at our profile

Thanks again. I opened up now private pictures as well for you

I would take out two of the three shot's of the female half's ass. You are wasting valuable real-estate there.

I would also add in one picture of the two of you dressed nicely, like you were going to a nice restaurant or church. If I reach out to you, I want to know that you aren't going to roll into the restaurant wearing TapouT gear.

If you have anything recent, add in some pics of the two of you traveling, on vacation or doing interesting things. There is a reason why I show us cycling and at Nationals Games - I want people to feel comfortable reaching out to us about something other than sex.

If you two have any other hobbies that are interesting - travel, museums, or if you rock climb or fly a plane, I would but those in there too. I want to think that guy I'm going to fuck is interesting.

Thanks for the recommendations. We will try to make some improvements.

I'm not actually certain why I can see your profile, but by some weird magic (aka SOSDD SLS glitches), I can.

I often leave photo comments to Velma, but your gallery includes a dreaded bathroom selfie - please don't - and some fairly unappealing body parts shots. I think you can do much better, particularly if you want to attract professional couples.

Your profile has a couple of missing words (the easiest way to find them is to read it aloud) and it's discreet rather than discrete.

Other than that, you look hot but don't sound like you're much fun. If that's accurate, you're good. If it isn't, you might want to recast some things to remove the negativity - talk about what you do like rather than what you don't - and consider altering your tone just a little.

The only other thing is you have too many certs in too short of time, at least for me. Maybe think about cutting one.

Good luck!

Picture-wise, I think your pics are very well composed. I really like the default pic. I would toss out a few of the “this is her ass” pics. Never show the same pic twice. I would also try to keep the pictures under 10. Less is mores

You two come off as a little douchy - and this is coming from a lady who does Triathlon. When a triathlete -quite possibly the most douchy sport ever- is calling you douchy, sit up and take notice.

I mean... look at our profile. We don’t say “if you can’t run a marathon, we probably won’t be attracted to you.”

Now the only caveat to this is that of it works for you, don’t touch it. If you just want smoking hot weightlifters or whatever, I wouldn’t change a thing. But if we were to swing by your neighborhood for the Chicago Triathlon, would you want to fuck us? Because we probably wouldn’t reach out to you right now with the “Truthfully, we probably won't be attracted if you are overweight” line because I think just one of my tits weighs as much as your wife.

We would like to have some constructive criticism of our profile. Anything glaring or over the top?

Thanks in advance,
R&P