Looking for some pointers

Thank you everyone for the input. I'll put some 0f it to work for sure!

I'm getting conflicting messages from your profile - are you a one dimensional sex toy or a well rounded person to have fun with? I see glimpses of both and might pass for fear of getting one while wanting the other. Perhaps you can decide on the real you while incorporating all the great advice from the other posters.

A profile that is balanced and uses a consistent writing style throughout will present you better than what you have now. Aim for each section to be of similar length - currently Looking For is excessively long compared to the other sections. Analyze your content to be sure it is in the correct section - your Looking For shouldn't be about you. Keep everything positive and don't try to tell other adults what to do.

Your pictures should be mostly full body and taken by others - nicely dressed and/or doing something fun. The pool or beach is a good way to show off your body - the current selfie is not. Remember to smile and watch for clutter or visual chaos in the background.

Let us know when your revised profile has been approved if you want additional advice.

Have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

There are a few negative sentances, like all the ones starting with "Don't". You shouldn't have to tell people not to do things that NOBODY likes. It just creates a negative impression in general. It's not like telling people make them will stop doing it if their so inclined. It CAN make people that might otherwise be interested look elsewhere.

There's text that fits better in other places and some that can go away. You don't need a physical description. That's what the pictures are for. Treat each heading like it's asking a question, then ask if the text that's there is in the best place for it. Your profile is already short, so there shouldn't be a need to repeat anything.

Other than that, all of the other advise looked good as well.

You got some good advice.

Maybe it's because Pesach, but when I saw your stomach, I thought I was looking at a brisket.

Your first picture can be shirtless, but it should be full-body. You should also have a picture of you dressed nicely. The picture of you on the show-machine is fine, but it looks like something they would show on the news for the Unibomber. It's 2020. Use a real phone to get better pictures.

I will second the assessment of your default picture. If you don't have someone to take pics for you then use the timer function on you camera app. Get some really nice pics up and it will help your profile quite a bit.

Don't be happy just being the stunt black dick. Be yourself and not a token. There are QOS's out there that don't really care to talk, hang out, or get to know you. Seems like you are searching for a little bit more than that. Be assertive in how you write your profile.

Like Molly said mentioning drama in your profile is basically attaching a warning label to yourself. Most people who accuse others of drama are often the ones who start it and swim in it. These seems to be only worse in the LS. Perhaps you have had a bad experience and want to avoid that again. If that is the case don't talk about drama. Just say you have had some great and no so great experiences in the LS if you have to reference it.

Hi. Please tell me you've read some of the other threads. Because if you haven't, the bluntness of the advice you'll get in this section is going to be a very unpleasant surprise. Like, it's not fun even if you are expecting it, but the surprise would make it feel worse. I promise though, that the intent is kindly meant.

So, first, your photos aren't great. Not only is every second single guy sporting a naked torso as a default, which is tiresome enough, but yours is taken from a bad angle. Instead, if you're going to have a bare torso shot (and why not), make it one that someone else takes and have a reason for it (you're at hot yoga or the beach or whatever). Don't just drop your pants, lift your shirt and take a bad selfie.

Your tagline could be worse, but you'd really have to work at it. You've got typos, you've called yourself a token and you've decided to advertise your passive approach, which is a mistake. Try instead for something that makes people want to open your profile (no, that's not what is taking place with what you have).

In Looking For, the part about hating drama and not tolerating it is a shit opener. I already don't like your profile and I don't believe you when you say you're laid back. Not only do I not believe anyone who says they don't like drama - if there's drama in your life, chances are you're a large part of the cause - the whole issue of what you will and will not tolerate is a bit fraught. Then in a section meant to be about others, you mostly concentrate on yourself. That you end this section with a series of don'ts - no, it doesn't matter if they're justified - kind of confirms you're high maintenance.

So, not a good look or a very inviting start.

Instead, please talk about who you're looking for and then a bit about what you're looking for (a partner in crime, friendships).

I mostly like Description. It's written in a way that no one else would use, so even though there are things you could change, the only thing you need to fix are your typos. I'll talk more about them at the end.

Fantasies is the place to talk about your three years experience and your fondness for hotwife and group play, rather than where you have it now. Also, you need more empty lines in between paragraphs in order to defeat one of SLS's more annoying peculiarities.

Additional comments really should end on an upbeat, charming note. So while this is the place where you say not to message you right away for cock shots, and the only place it should be, find a better way to end the section and your profile.

So, it's pretty clear you didn't run your text through any sort of spelling or grammar check. Which, since you don't seem to understand punctuation or capitalization, is pretty unfortunate. The typos make you look like you don't care enough to go that extra step and even if you fix everything else, that problem will remain. So, don't use your phone and do use the most robust spelling and grammar checking you can find. And then read what you write out loud to make sure it flows in a pleasing way and doesn't have weird errors.

So, collect opinions, fix things and then please come back for another review.

Good luck.

Just looking for some advice on my profile thanks in advance