Help with profile

1lkydogRegular
Swarthmore, PA, Us

Hey Mr clean-cut with short hair and tie - like your one pic but not your underweight profile. I'm not sure if you've enacted any of the changes the real scholars before me suggested, cause your profile still looks emaciated. As if thin’s the new gold, I'll comment on what I see now and hope you follow the some of the suggestions from others so you can become that special add-on with a couple you mention.

We block single males cause they're like a flock of pigeons; wings a flappin, usually stinky, and always circling. Occasionally, our eyes spot one that stands out from the flock. He’s likely not be the front bird, the biggest, or the highest, but he’s caught our eye with his unique, special style and his looks that say “I'm fun take me home.” What we’re looking for in pigeons is what we searching for in single men; ones that stand out from the flock in their own unique way, ones that don’t stink, and ones that say “I’m fun, take me home.” At this point in my viewing, your profile says none of those things to us and your profile in it’s present state says you’re part of the flock, out there someplace, flapping your wings.

Instead, how about some of your personality that matches your Mr Conservative pic, like < I verify computers, run governments, visit the bad kitty club, chase vermin, rid the world of mice, take nutritious mini-mark shopping seriously, and I can carry on a conversation about most topics. I’m a respectful man and kryptonite’s got nothing on me.> ... and please, please, please if you’re somebody who gets wacked by kryptonite - tell me you're Superman.

As for "I know that I am an add on with a couple and not a replacement” every guy expects you’ll be respectful to the lady, but what every man also wants is for you to be respectful to him too - that’s way important to us dudes. When I get along well with a guy I always want him to consider my Mrs and the call’s on her. Using your words, I’d come up with a cue the guys would understand, like <I know that I am an add on with a couple and not a replacement. I’m a respectful man, laid back, and I know how to carry on a conversation and follow the pace of my partners. I am all-in for making my partners comfortable around me in their bedroom.>

In Fantasies "I have been involved in several mfm and mmf” sounds so unspecial. Pump it up and make it special, like <My past experiences with mfm and mmf were sensational and they’ve made me determined to love move couples>…we love shy newbies who end up being the loudest screamers on the roller coaster.

So add some weight to that underweight profile and become that special add-on to couples we like.

Cheektowaga, NY, Us

Thank you all I have began to make the changes and they are now waiting approval.

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. If you've fixed the spelling errors, the changes have not taken effect.

However, even without typos, your profile needs some work. In Looking For, that's all you want? People who know how to have a good time and relax? I mean, yes, that's undemanding of you, but it also won't net you many fish. "I am looking for couples and women for hot threesomes and twosomes" miiight be enough, but nebulous desires for a good time probably won't be.

In Description, don't bother describing your body. Have public photos. Unless you're married, which is the automatic assumption when you sport a Gumby. You don't need to talk about your tattoos either. Instead, what sort of person are you? What do you like to do? Take that whole "I can talk with anyone about anything" gift and use it here.

The part about not being a replacement is great, but it would be better in Additional comments. Which needs it, because you really do need to have a public gallery and a default photo. No excuses. You are a solo man and there are a lot of your cohort; without photos you might as well pick a different hobby. So all that photo discussion can go.

In Fantasies, that's too specific. This section isn't for your spank material, or at least it needs to get cleaned up so that it's a little enticing. A couple picking you up in the hardware store? Yeah, sure. The details of what happens next? Not so much.

Basically, you have some work to do.

So, keep making changes and then come back for a review. Good luck.

AandJinNNJVeteran
Ringwood, NJ, Us

First impressions - no public pics, no certs in over a year - you're married and cheating.

Some may not care but others will.

Also, the profile itself has multiple typos which suggest a rushed personality.

You don't really tell us much about you or what you're looking for.

Our opinion of course.

Cheektowaga, NY, Us

Can you take a look and let me know. I have all ready fixed the spelling error thanks for your help