Critique our Profile

Ok, my first thought is that it's too wordy and long.

As another noted, only pics her her and none of you as a couple is a nope for me, if I'm looking for a couple.

I don't have much time but two things stand out when I look at your profile:

No pictures of him or of y'all as a couple - pretty much a "nope" when I'm looking for a couple.

No mention of any of your vanilla interests - we're all here for sex, but it's not all about sex.

Neither should be difficult to fix. Get someone to take a photo next time you go out to dinner, have her snap a photo or two of him alone (beach or pool are good for showing of his body). Maybe prune your current text (there is some redundancy) and then add a bit of what else you enjoy - music, sports, outdoor activities, etc.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

It explains what you are looking for fairly well. I don't think any tweaking would be needed if that is the goal.

It’s been awhile since we’ve rewritten our profile. Our interests remain the same, but maybe we can make it better? Feel free to let us know what you think!