Much appreciated! Those are "self-evident" critiques that I totally missed. Will incorporate your suggestions. Wasn't sure what side of the line my "bathroom selfie-like" torso shot was on, but I figured at least it's truth in advertising ...
Nothing looks too terrible about your profile - so you don't get the "it's about the profile, not you" disclaimer since I don't have to be mean! You just need to make yourself more appealing - nothing really turns me off but nothing gets me excited to meet you either.
Looks to me like you need to rearrange a bit - some of what you have in Fantasy really belongs in Looking For or Description. And then add some information to Description about your interests so people know something about you. As others have stated in numerous profile reviews - you need a "hook" to get the conversation started. It could be common interests (cooking, hiking, sports, etc.) or something interesting like our year long RV sightseeing trip of the US.
I'm not fond of the half-dressed selfie but at least it's not a bathroom selfie. Get someone to take pictures of you while you're enjoying that summer fun in the sun that your tag line implies. Almost anyone will take a picture of you - even strangers if you're not with friends.
Good luck & have fun!
~Phoebert's Wife
Would appreciate any profile feedback - well, maybe not "any." Have read a lot of helpful feedback on other requests, which is encouraging. Thanks in advance y'all!
