Spruce Up

Hi. This is a bit quick and dirty, and I can't gauge anyone's assessment of my manners, but I'll give it a shot.

There are more than a few typos in your profile and those should be fixed.

In Looking For, it sounds more like a conversation between the two of you than something that will usefully entice others. So, maybe replace it with a few sentences about who and what you're looking for.

Description, condensed quite a bit, can fit in both Fantasies and Additional comments. Instead, in this section, highlight the interesting people you are as Individuals and as a couple. Photos are great at conveying physical aspects like body type, but you're going to need words to make the case for what awesome folks you are to meet. I'm always excited when people mention books for instance, but don't care that he has a titanium tongue ( used for illustration purposes only). Which is the long way around to say that sex is the end goal but being attracted to our potential partners for other reasons is the surest way to get there.

Other than that fill out all the sections, ask yourself how many photos you actually need, and lose the part about what she has done lest that sound like a pillow princess situation rather than lack of opportunity.

Good luck.

Bi-curious, bi-situational, bi-friendly are all BI ERASURE.

Bisexuality isn't a toggle switch or identifier of the kind of sex you have or have had. It's a sexual orientation, and it isn't a choice.

If you are attracted to your own gender and other genders, you are bisexual.

In the same way that being straight doesn't mean you want to fuck everyone of the "opposite" gender, bisexual or gay or lesbian doesn't mean you want to fuck everyone of the same gender.

If people are going to say they are bi in any way in a community that is about hooking up/dating/sex, it behooves them to learn about their own sexuality and what that means.

Really, really quick comments - might have a chance to do a better review later.

We're all here for sex, but it's not all about sex. Talk more about what makes you unique, interesting and fun people and less about sex in Description. And in Looking For you don't really want to talk about yourselves much at all.

Your photos are generally good but I'd rather you took pictures of each other than individual selfies - yours are better than most but they always seem to result in awkward angles. Just remember to smile - you both have great smiles!

If you're making good contacts in a month on SLS then you're doing better than most!

Good luck, have fun and stay safe.

~Phoebert's Wife

Looking for some recommendations or polite criticism on our profile. We seem to be doing good for a new couple, but always good to get some advice.