Profile review / advice

In usability/audience testing, best practice is for your focus group to consist of your target market.

It looks pretty good to me but there are a few more things you might want to consider.

Delete that whole sentence at the end - it's just a repeat of what your toggles indicate and/or statements you've made elsewhere. Plus single men are blocked when you show no interest in them - I know, that's not what SLS says, but that's how it really works.

Probably want to delete that stray "E" after the last line also.

I'd combine the two lines about being shy - something along the lines of "we're both a bit shy at first but he warms up more quickly" will eliminate some repetition and condense your text.

I'm not a fan of the "G" and "K" designations - use he/she or him/her to talk about yourselves individually. It is hard to keep track of which initial belong to which person - you want to make this easy for people!

You've got some abbreviations that may or may not be commonly understood - spell out the various musical genres.

The last line of Looking For is overly complicated. And the term "unicorn" is often not appreciated by single ladies.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

OK the changes posted.

Thanks again for the feeback / advise. We did not feel it terrible "blunt" or offensive in any way. It takes a lot to offend us, however!

Thanks for the input and advice.

We have done some updates and once "approved" we will advise here and seek a re-review!

"...would like to point out that you will eliminate yourself from more people's consideration by not listing your weight than by doing so."

To your benefit, you do have pictures that show your size/shape, but some here are just looking for a reason to say "No", and this may be all it takes for some. You can say that you'd not be interested in those that think that way, but why limit yourself?

There are people of all sizes and shapes in the LS. Unless you have unrealistic expectations, listing your avverage weight will typically help your chances, which is the point of asking for a profile review ;-)

Hi. The advice you'll get here is generally really blunt, but it's kindly meant.

So, first, the solution to your sideways photos is in the Website section, in the thread titled " Pictures change orientation when uploaded."

As far as your profile, I have some opinions.

First, I think I'm done fighting the battle of 0 weight, but would like to point out that you will eliminate yourself from more people's consideration by not listing your weight than by doing so. Yes, I agree, it's no one's business, but that is not the point.

In Looking For, start with a complete sentence and somehow construct the second so that those social activities sound like a fun addition to play time rather than a hurdle. And if you're going to toggle an interest in single women, at least mention them here, even if it's just glancingly (we're also occasionally open to, etc.).

In Description, I really don't care about what brought you to the LS. Or at least I don't care there, where you have the opportunity to give a brief but well rounded description of the two of you as a couple, people we'd like to meet. Be your best vanilla selves in this section.

In Fantasies, I'd leave out the sentence about adding experience. It's probably useful for the two of you to keep in mind, but it just drags down this section without adding anything of value. Plus you essentially say the same thing in Additional comments. Which should instead end on a high note of some kind, because it's your last chance to charm people.

Basically, your profile sounds like it was written by a guy doing an assignment rather than a marketing document created by the two of you together because you're interested in meeting cool folks and having fun.

So, fix your photos (and take better ones when you have the opportunity), change your tagline to something less bland, and turn your profile into something that represents you well as the fun couple you claim to be.

Good luck. I hope you check in after you make some changes.

It's concise and get's the point across, but is kind of lacking. The Looking For should at least give a general idea of what you want to do when you find people, such as "MFMF, same or separate room full swap". The "Primarily interested in couple:couple play, but both have hall passes for the right situation." fits better in the Looking for section, with perhaps the "hall pass" thing going in Additional Comments.

The Description section is particularly lacking and doesn't need your ages listed, since they are already listed in the general toggles section. This is normally where people would put their other interests, but you did that in the Additional Comments section. The description can include some things about your personalities, such as shy or outgoing, and you as a couple, such as married X years. You also list her as Bi Curious, and this would be a place to expand on that.

As for pictures, it doesn't make much sense to put duplicate pictures in your private gallery of ones already in your public gallery. Some choose to put their face pictures in the private gallery and this may also be where any R-rated ones go, with possibly X-rated pictures going in the personal gallery so you can grant specific access of each, depending on the interest and comfort level with a target couple.

For more ideas for any of the sections, you can look at other people's profiles. It is OK to copy from others if you see something you like or just may have not thought to add to yours.

Would like opinions on our profile.

We realize the sideways photos are a p.i.t.a. but can't figure out how to fix them. Apparently it is due to some encription on the file from taking them on the phone.

Thanks in advance!