Profile Review

Fair point, my profile leaves a lot to be desired. Though it explains the views and few replies.

Hi. I hope whoever sent you here explained that this could be an unpleasant experience in bluntness. Try to stay with it though, because the aim is for you to succeed.

So, first, your post here is articulate and you have no spelling errors. Your profile feels like it was written by an entirely different person, since it is the opposite. Not sure what gives, but if you're going to be sloppy, please don't do it in your profile. We'll get to what I think you need to do in a moment.

In the meantime, your photos are terrible. I double checked your age and you're definitely old enough to have noticed that women respond really well to a great smile and not at all well to faux thousand yard stares (unless you've earned one, but you should still smile). Plus nude bathroom selfies are the worst. Please, for the love of all that is holy, have someone else take full length clothed photos of you and smile. Set a timer on your phone if you feel like you must have a nude selfie and hide it in a private gallery that you don't open unless someone asks to see your dick.

You have a typo in your tagline. Like, it's not a great tagline, but it will do, so long as you fix the error.

In Looking For, the first sentence is good and so is the last, but the rest is pretty much shit for various reasons. It's full of typos, women aren't here for your stress relief (unless you're paying), and it's too specific (and too specifically sexual). If you're also open to couples for MFM say so. That, with your first and last lines, make it three sentences and that's really enough if you can't think of anything more.

Description, with just that one line, is not impressive. Who are you? What kind of guy are you? What are some of the (non-sexual) things you like doing? Yeah, you're busy, but give people a little hint of who they'd be meeting. There are eleventy-thousand guys out there that you're competing with, but there is no one like you.

Fantasies doesn't need that "Though," which makes it feel like something is missing. You might also want to add if you have had experience (which your cert says you have) and the part where you want to please a woman sexually and maybe have her show you a thing or two can also go here. Also, oil and condoms don't go well together, so keep that in mind.

There's a whole other section here that you have not taken advantage of. Don't do that. Don't have a graphic example of how you don't finish things. You can put anything here, so long as you end on a high note.

Good luck. Collect opinions, make changes and then come back, please.

Hello, I am looking to have my profile critiqued. I was referred here if I wanted to get help in building a better one. Any assistance would be appreciated.