Profile help

@Playfulparty777

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Please critique our profile. Playfulparty777

Standard disclaimer - if I'm mean it is directed at your profile, not at you personally.

Do you not have friends? That is the first thing I think when I see all selfies. Any friend will take a picture when you're out doing something fun - just ask them! Or ask a stranger if you are out alone - most people are happy to help. You especially need to ditch the almost naked selfie - it is exceptionally bad. I'll ask if I want to see naked pictures so use a beach or pool picture to show off your body in your public gallery. The two pictures you need to start with are a fully clothed, full body shot and one where you're doing something fun. Smile and watch for cluttered backgrounds.

Daytime fun could lead some to believe you are married and cheating so if there is another reason (night shift job perhaps) you might want to mention that. I'd leave out the pain, pee, poop and drama line - anyone looking for those things will bring it up long before it gets to that point and drama llamas never think they bring drama.

Eliminate the lol, :) and ;). They are fine in your emails but treat your profile more like a resume. I'd also eliminate the hygenic thru flossing bit - it makes it appear as if you do not expect your audience to have the same habits as you (and that's just an annoying assumption since most of have those habits).

Fantasies ends with an incomplete sentence with no punctuation - almost looks like you just stopped in the middle of a thought and decided you were done (especially since the following section is blank).

You have a lot of spacing issues and questionable sentence structure - are you composing on your phone? I recommend copying all your text into a word processor and run spell check & grammar check before copying your text back to SLS. Add extra lines between paragraphs to make it easier to read.

So do some rewrites and good luck!

~Phoebert's Wife

Initially it was set up as a couple. Took some time to figure out how to change. I'll make a new profile and transfer membership.

When I first saw your profile name I assumed you were a couple - another reason to think about creating a new profile and transferring your Lifetime membership to it.

I'll be back to look at your profile and offer my thoughts after I get dinner fixed, feed the family and wash the dishes.

~Phoebert's Wife

That made me literally laugh out loud. I'll definitely change the name. I don't want to make people puke off the bat.
Thank you for the feedback. :)

The first thing I woud do is change your profie name. The idea of "hunting" another human being makes me want to throw up on my mouth a little.

Hello, looking for some advise on my profile.
I know I could use some other pics of myself that are not selfies. I'll upload later today or tomorrow.
Anything you can recommend I would appreciate.
Thank you in advance