Profile Feedback Please

A few things jump out at me:

You have a few duplicate (or essentially duplicate) pictures in your public gallery and while you have a lovely ass you really only need one or two pictures of it in your public gallery. I'd delete all the selfies (the messy backgrounds are too distracting) and keep the current profile picture and the first one of you sitting on the beach. Any pictures of your manly attributes should be in a private gallery only to be opened upon request. You need some fully dressed pictures in your public gallery - doing fun things and how you would show up for a meet & greet (jeans & polo shirt or dress slacks & dress shirt). I'm surprised Velma didn't offer up her system for core pictures - look in other profile reviews for her picture advice to single guys.

Your toggles show full interest in single ladies but nowhere in your profile text do you mention them - the interest level and text need to match.

Delete the warning you have in Additional Comments - at best it is an urban legend; at worst it indicates you're gullible.

I'm not always aware of the finer nuances of lifestyle terminology but I thought cuck indicates a husband who likes for his wife to be fucked by others - and you are now divorced. So I agree with Velma that your screen name is misleading and confusing. You may have to create a new profile and have admin move your lifetime membership to the new profile (I don't think you can just have the name changed on this profile - check with SLS admin).

In general you have information all over the place - sometimes in the correct section and sometimes not. Analyze each sentence for where it really belongs. Then refine each section. Read things out loud to catch awkward phrasing - you have something off happening at the beginning of Fantasies.

And then when you get it the way you want it and it has been approved - go back in and edit the want smokers/drinkers toggles - they revert to defaults of want smokers/want drinkers after every profile approval and that's not usually what most people want. As long as you make no other changes there is no additional approval needed and your actual wants remain.

Good luck!

~Phoebert's Wife

Hi David. In spite of the way your toggles are set, it seems unlikely that you're looking for single women and I'm proceeding as if that's true. However, your current profile is unlikely to appeal to any women, married or not. Your photos are particularly ill suited to appeal to women. but the text is unlikely to do so either.

If you are interested only in men, then you just need to clean up your abundant typos - for instance, words like couple, top and man are not capitalized and I think you mean bottom where you've written "bit" - and remove that ridiculous Sydney University thing.

If, however, you are interested in couples, then you're need to do some work. Women aren't going to be interested in your ass, either in photos or in the wax job and will veto you even if their husbands might be inclined to contact you. So, if you'd actually like to capture the interest of women, one or two photos of your ass maximum, do not describe your grooming routine, and do say more about yourself as a person. What are the things you like to do that aren't sexual? Hobbies, interests, passions or pursuits? Humanize yourself, be a person. Post photos of yourself in clothing.

And replace the Sydney University thing with something positive and interesting.

I think your profile is pretty good the way it is if you are only looking for bi males.

I would add one picture of you nicely dressed the way you might look if you were meeting a couple for a date.

I would also contact the admins to see if you can change your name.

A single male with the name “bihubby” is confusing since you are divorced. Maybe change it to bibottom or something to be more clear about your status.

Please check out my profile and let me know how well it stands...

Thanks,

David