Please start your own thread. Open Better Profiles and on the right, about a third of the way down, is a clickable link for New Topic (it's in the same place as the reply option in the individual threads). Click that, give it a title and just say what you're looking for.
Hi. I'm new to all of this. Can someone please take a look at my profile and help me improve it :)
Mich4her You probably should start your own topic so it doesn't get lost with the OP
Hi there, would you please take a look at ours and provide feedback. Thanks !
It does look good. You also misspelt receive, but once you fix those two typos (and delete the bathroom selfie, which is its own sort of unpleasant cliche), I think you're gold.
Looking good! But you still need to delete that bathroom mirror selfie. ;-)
And other than misspelling "particular" the fantasy/experience text you have now is better than most.
My pictures just got approved and my profile updates have just posted. I'm going to edit the fantasy section later.
I'm just going to paste what you have and correct the typos. There's only one each in Looking For and Additional comments, but a bunch in Description. Plus, I removed one personal pronoun for reasons of tedium. I also didn't put in commas, even though grammatically they'd be the correct option, because there's something charming about the breathlessness of having none (and the sentences didn't require them for reasons of sense). Otherwise, once again, you did a really nice job.
Looking For:
I'm looking for interesting, adventurous, and enjoyable company for vanilla and kink related activities. I'm open to talking with everyone and I can't wait to meet you.
Description:
I'm a magician who's been performing off and on for about 7 years. Whenever this COVID nonsense is over I'll get to go back to traveling around and performing.
I'm a nerd. I'm passionate about pretty much all of the "nerdy" topics and I've only met one scifi show i didn't like. I've been to anime and gaming conventions, but I don't cosplay or anything...yet.
I'm a new Tiny Houser. I'm just wrapping up my first camper to tiny house renovation and I'll be back on the road again soon. I've already traveled most of America (I'm missing "4" states) and I'm looking forward to seeing everything all over again. On that note I'm moving my homebase to NM sometime in 2021. I'm very big on building an easily sustainable lifestyle and value experiences over things. If you have any questions about it feel free to drop me message.
Aside from that I'm a very relaxed type of person. I'm the type of person who tries to make every encounter fun and enjoyable. So let's crack some jokes, play some music, and eat something (or someone) new and delicious.
Additional comments and things to do, see, hear or learn about:
This is my second go at this site. I gave up last time, because I didn't like the UI. But you're all so wonderful I had to come back.
Nice job. You have some typos, but since you can't correct them until your changes have been approved, I'll wait until tomorrow to tell you what they are. As far as your photos, eventually SLS will fix that function, but until then there's not much you can do about adding new ones.
I like the new text - your personality really shines. Hopefully you're working on similarly great information for the Experiences/Fantasies section.
Some mirror selfies work well - but bathrooms are a difficult environment. Bad lighting and too much visual clutter means that your bathroom mirror selfie is not a good look.
Rather than pasting your new text here it might be easier to just post a message that your updated profile is available for review again - it makes it easier for us to get the whole picture. ;-)
Keep up the good work!
Also ill be uploading new pictures and filling out the fantasy section soon.
So I've submitted some updates and I'm waiting for them to be approved. Here's what i updated.
New Looking for:
I'm looking for interesting, adventurous, and enjoyable company for vanilla and kink related activities. I'm open to talking with everyone and i can't wait to meet you.
New Description:
I'm a magician who's been performing off and on for about 7 years. Whenever this COVID nonsense is over I'll get to go back to traveling around and performing.
I'm a nerd. I'm passionate about pretty much all of the "nerdy" topics and I've only met 1 scifi show i didn't like. I've been to Anime and Gaming conventions, but i don't cosplayed anything...yet.
I'm a new Tiny Houser. I'm just wrapping up my first camper to tiny house renovation and I'll be back on the road again soon. I've already traveled most of America(I'm missing "4" states) and I'm looking forward to seeing everything all over again. On that note I'm moving my homebase to NM sometime in 2021. I'm very big on building an easily sustainable lifestyle and I value experiences over things. If you have any questions about it feel free to drop me message.
Aside from that I'm a very relaxed type of person. I'm the type of person who tries to make every encounter fun and enjoyable. So lets crack some jokes, play some music, and eat something (or someone) new and delicious.
New Additional Comments
This is my second go at this site. I gave up last time, because i didn't like the UI. But you're all so wonderful I had to come back.
Hi. Fair warning that I'm pretty blunt at the best of times, but my intentions are benign.
I see you've deleted the photo. I didn't see it, but good call. The one you have is a good one and you just need more.
As far as your text, I have opinions. I'm torn about your tagline. That's kind of a high, cocky bar to set, plus there's a hint of a subterranean dig at husbands. Probably not intentional, but why take chances? What about 'I'm the most interesting man you haven't met yet' instead?
In Looking For, you could probably use another sentence and it's "adventurous."
In Description, I too think you'd be better off with a narrative instead of a list, but this could work. Just change the second item to "A nerd" and change what you have to: Aside from that, I'm a... or, Aside from those points, I'm a...
In Fantasies, you have a chance to talk more about those vanilla and kink related activities. At the very least, some reassurance that you won't show up in a latex bodysuit carrying a single tail would be a good idea. Also, unless you'd like to occupy a tiny niche, a nod to the notion that kink is optional for you would go well here.
In Additional comments, you've managed to sound lighthearted but also a little...something. The UI isn't any better, so you might want to think about how to counteract any sense that you'll bail again. Doesn't have to relate in any way, but a sentence that ends on a high note might be enough.
Good luck. I hope you make some changes and come back.
Yeah - bullet point lists are efficient but most people prefer the same information in paragraph form as it better shows personality. And your personality shines through nicely in the sections where you used sentences.
The sections that you've completed are actually full of good information but I can't believe that you left the Experience/Fantasy section blank. Usually we have to tell people to tone down the sexy info - you need to add some! Surely there are some activities that you want to try or have enjoyed and want to experience again.
Not sure you'll find the UI any better than previously - but we can dream. ;-)
Good luck, have fun and stay safe!
~Phoebert's Wife
If you were what I was looking for I would pass. Never post a picture that makes you look sad, stoned, depressed, angry, etc. The one photo of you is decent and the other is pretty bad. Honestly, I don't care for your glasses. Something that compliments your face would work better. If you are a performer get some decent pics of you doing what you do. Let people see who you are in your pics.
Your profile is super brief. Try and write in sentences rather than bullet points. You really don't let people know what you are looking for. Be specific about couples, singles, types of play, etc. The more information you have the more likely you will pique someone's interest.
I'm "new" on here and I need feedback on how I'm presenting myself. I recently submitted some new pictures and a profile update. I'll post the update below so you'll have the most up to date info.
Update:
The big stuff:
I'm a magician
I'm a nerd
Uber Driver/ courier
Tiny Houser
Moving to NM in 2021
I live my life on my terms.
Aside from those big points I'm a very relaxed type of person. I'm the type of person who tries to make every encounter fun and enjoyable. So lets crack some jokes, play some music, and eat something(or someone) new and delicious.
