Please critique my profile

I agree with Velma & Molly..I like that pic too. Makes me wonder .."what's underneath that?"
Best wishes..

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Not just for me. Not even for Velma. You're just going to have to trust us about that look. It's classy and hot.

Virginia Beach, VA, Us

yes-please keep that as your default picture .

yzmanMember
New Haven, CT, Us

Ok Molly I put it back for you.

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Pfffttt. If everyone jumped off a cliff, would you follow them? Fine. Naked torso it is. ;-)

If you're going to wear a tee shirt, then more fitted please. But what I really want is the slightly unbuttoned shirt photo back. Seriously, that's a hot shot.

yzmanMember
New Haven, CT, Us

Ouch. Molly I like your honest views and the time you take to do it. I felt like putting out more fun pictures because I want to express myself. There are TONS of profiles with half naked pics and they seem to be working for them. I put up more pics of my shirt on.

Virginia Beach, VA, Us

You should have a couple of pictures of you in a suit or doing fun things-the teal T-shirt really doesn’t help.

If you’re going to have shirtless pictures-have them at the beach or at a pool and have them taken by someone else

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. This time around, I hate your photos. I am probably unusual in that I spend most mornings looking at men's bare chests and I'm jaded, but it's also the male version of boobs and butts and just as tiresome (why, yes, I do know what I'm using as my profile photo). Your earlier photos were better.

I can't really remember the earlier iteration of your profile, but if it was like this I'm surprised I didn't object strenuously to the way you've mixed your categories. In Looking For, don't describe yourself. Don't talk about your sexual practices or condom use. Really, it's just for saying what you're looking for. So, maybe some detail about what you're looking for in those women and couples you're looking for. Also, that's not how "consensual" should be used.

In Description, we already know your height, because it's in your stats. Cock size = you just lost me and 85% of the rest of the women who read your profile, but guys (including straight guys) are gonna eat that shit up for reasons I do not understand. So maybe don't? Also, I have no idea what you mean by keeping your stamina upbeat, because those words don't go together.

That you're straight goes in Additional comments (OH, HEY, I JUST DISCOVERED THE IMPROVEMENT - The wording on the last category of profiles has been changed)

Sorry. I wish I liked this profile better than I do, but I don't. You sound stuffy.

Good luck.

yzmanMember
New Haven, CT, Us

Hi. I’d like help with my profile. Any thoughts would be appreciated.