Need some help with my profile

You're entirely welcome. I'm hoping somebody else comes along with a completely different viewpoint, too, because the group mind is better than just one opinion. Good luck!

Thanks again msmolly! I did some more fine tuning, but still have to figure out my pic situation and tagline. I am in the field training with my new phone, and all i have is my uniforms and really dont want to post a bunch of pics of me in it. You've been very awesome and helpful.

Hi again. I like most of the changes you made, but think another refinement might be necessary. Also, periodically update your profile. It might only be a word or two, or swapping out some photos, but change is good.

First, better almost any photo than a blue gumby. Really. Also, I think your tagline is interesting, but I have no clue what it means and I'm not sure it will invite others to take a look. I think I would, though, just to see what was behind it, but it's "let's," not "lets."

In Looking For, I liked your original first sentence better. Maybe try this: "I'm here to meet people and then fuck them. Hopefully make some good friends and memories along the way. I'm equally interested in single women and couples." So, a little punchier and you don't get stuck in the awkwardness of saying you want to fuck couples, when you're straight and it's probably not true.

I like what you have in Description. You might want to consider adding more content though. What do you do when you aren't fucking? It's not necessary, but think about what else you might put here, because you're also looking for friends and it helps to give people information to help them decide if they want to engage with you.

Fantasies make you sound like a nice person, so keep it. This is one of the places to update as you get more experience.

In Additional, the likelihood of people making a first contact through kik is pretty slim, plus the likelihood is that you will be doing most of the first contacts (where you should not give your kik), so I think you're wasting real estate here. I think you should use the space to give one more nudge, to entice people to pick you instead of that other guy. Feel free to ignore that advice and if you do, it's "it's" rather than "its" and "no thank you." with the period inside the parenthesis,

Thanks ms molly and tramp. I will make the fixes... i appreciate the help!

You guys are just too good.

We have three profiles here (our couples and each a single), and I've rewritten them more often than I shave my face!

The problem is this:

I don't post in here much, but I read it every day. Every time I think I've made progress, you guys put something else out there that I haven't thought of and right back to the drawing board I go. Dayemmm. ;^D

Tramp

Hi. You're not ugly (although your photos are not doing you any favors) and your profile doesn't suck, but it definitely needs work.

First, on photos, please have some that show your face with a pleasant expression. I actually prefer the one with the dog, although I agree that it shouldn't be a profile photo, because I think I see a tiny smile. So, yeah, please arrange your face in pleasing lines and photograph that, preferably without making it obvious that it's a selfie. If VelmaAndShaggy don't show up to give you a critique, search out her advice on photos on other requests for a profile review and take her advice to heart.

The first thing is your tagline. It should be something that invites people to read your profile. Yours reads "omarion.hicks," which makes no sense and doesn't do the job. If you can't think of one, steal somebody's, preferably from a location far away from you.

In Looking For, I like the first sentence, because it's blunt and funny and probably a good reflection of you. Just get rid of the lol. This is a place for semi-formal language and lols don't cut it. The second sentence is also fine. Now you need to add content. I know you've selected that you're interested in couples and women, but this is the one place where it's a good thing to repeat what is already in your stats. You can say something like you're equally interested in couples and women or that you're open to single encounters as well as regular meetings or go wild and include some variation on both of those things.

In Description, get rid of your height and weight. Plus, for the love of all that is holy, please don't talk about your dick to anyone that doesn't ask about it. I'm sure anyone who reads my screeds on the regular is as tired of reading it as I am of giving this advice, but I'm going to do it anyway: I assume that men who talk about their dicks are more fascinated by them as objects than by what lovely things they might be able to do with them. It's not that women don't care, because size does matter (I would nope you, because that's too big), but you know who really wants the stats? Other men. So keep that in mind before you volunteer a description or a photo. Hygiene goes a long way, two words, Mama raised you right, comma, and it's boundaries. Also, lose the part about "set up ahead of time," because you really don't want anyone to think you can't make adjustments in the heat of the moment.

I don't know how I feel about that sentence about being shy. If it only happens occasionally, you can leave it off and just explain it if it hits you during a first meeting. If it's consistent, then it probably is okay to have here.

Pretty isn't capitalized and I'd leave off that whole section that starts with "within reason" and runs to "polite thing to do." Various reasons for this, which I will expound upon until you're bored stupid, but only if you ask me to do so. I like the line about having standards. Just leave off the "too" and the lol.

I kind of see where you're going with Fantasies and Additional comments, but I don't know if it's effective in the former case and the latter needs all its typos removed. It's space not spave and there's only one "u" in opportunity.

My other advice is to see if there are any meet and greets in your area that allow single men. If your mama really did raise you right, you have good company manners and taking the opportunity to display them in a social setting with other swingers will give you a leg up on the competition.

Ok, thanks again, RonKathy. Im looking through my pics and hopefully will find a winner.

Thanks for the feeback RonKathy, i will replace the pic, probably today. Which part sounds insecure? My forum header? That was suppose to be a bit of a joke, I know I'm dead sexy lol. Well at lease not fugly...

Do not know if im just ugly or my profile sucks. Any suggestions would be welcomed. Thanks in advance