Need help

Wow!
Pix: You both look like someone said, "Stand here and don't let anyone pass!" and you take that job very seriously.

Words: I don't know what the profile was like four days ago but there is punctuation, although the grammar could use a slight touch-up. I could understand what you're getting at but the advice to open a Word document is spot on. Half the time when I'm messaging, my phone thinks it's funny to totally change what I'm saying. I've ever had it re-autocorrect when I've fixed my typos. (No, Phone, I didn't fix my TOES, damn you!)

A few more SMILING pix, a bit more info on what you enjoy in everyday life, plus a bit of grammar and it will look beautiful!

You seem to be blending info in each or the sections. In Looking for, you want text that answers the question, "What are we looking for?" The Description section should just be about you.

Since you have pictures and list your height/weight, there is no reason to repeat that info. This is where you would list all of the the things you like to do and the part about her being insatiable and enjoying Bi play.

The part about the 32 acres could go in the Additional Comments section, and the part about attending house parties would fit best under the Experience section.

Your tag line is confusing and not a well formed sentence, or phrase even.

As an experiment, look at other profiles and see how YOU feel when you see someone with big smiles versus "just there" kind of looks and ask yourself which of those people that you's like to hang with. Don't underestimate the attractiveness of a big smile. People want to be with others that look like they are having fun.

As already mentioned, the warning at the end is toothless and makes you appear naive/gullible. It's a waste of space that adds nothing to your profile. Some people can be lazy and don't want to read a profile as it is, so why add even more useless words to your profile?

Thank you, we will do it today, I like people that are blunt

I hope you've read other postings here and realize that this might seem painful. Those of us that tend to voice an opinion about profiles are rather outspoken about what we think works. Just remember that everything said is about your profile - not you personally. We want your profile help you be successful here.

You are obviously doing something right - your certs show that you have been successful swingers for many years.

Some of the most glaring issues: you don't appear to be smiling in your pictures, you repeat your stats in your text and you have a stupid, urban legend warning that makes you look gullible.

Unfortunately your profile is very difficult to read. It appears to be a stream of consciousness, grammar-free, mind dump written on your phone. You need to organize your thoughts, eliminate repetition and answer the question posed by each section header. I would open a word processor and rewrite each section off-line - you need a screen large enough to see more than a line at a time and time to think about what you're writing. Once you have something you're happy with run spell check and grammar check on it before copying the text to SLS. If you try to revise from within SLS then every time you save a change you have to wait for SLS approval before making additional changes.

Please let us know when your revised profile has been approved. This is not a one & done exercise - it is a process that often takes several revisions before you're happy.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

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