I’d like your opinion

More QUALITY pics. Mrs HW would just delete that...not enough pics to be enticing. As she states in our profile..."you've seen enough of me by this time to know if you are interested in me"...she WILL NOT "ask me for more pics" etc....too many guys out there with profiles which already include great pics.

Mr HW

PS I believe I sent you some notes by email since they wouldn't post here?

If not, the main highlight would be..does that single pic of you represent you AT YOUR BEST? If that's the only pic, it better be you looking your best. While that's a fine casual pic, it's really just a pic like any other. You MUST have some sort of pic which makes you appear INTERESTING and also pics that emphasize your assets...that profile pic may be the only pic others will look at before just clicking on next.....for Mrs HW and probably most women...a pic in some sort of suit and a classy, shirtless, full body pic on the beach or at the pool which is shot to your advantage. Each pic should be considered as "somebody's beautiful wife is going to click on this profile for a few seconds...do I represent the kind of guy that a husband and wife are going to agree is the type they want to meet?" If you can do so, a face pic with a nice SMILE is a bonus!

It really boils down to that. If your appearance isn't what you would like it to be, then start working on making it over TODAY! We have a formerly vanilla friend who told us after we found each other out "Nothing keeps you in shape like being in the lifestyle!" It was funny, and kind of true in many ways.

Good luck.

I think men really only need three pictures -face, well dressed body pic, and shirtless by the pool or beach.

I also like to see men doing interesting things. Now, none of those pictures should ever be with a gun or a fish. But stuff like - pics of the male rock climbing, or running a marathon or piloting a plane or traveling to exotic places.

I want to think that you are an interesting guy who will have amazing conversations.

Hi. I appreciate the honesty and agree the paragraphing and sentencing I have is choppy.
I have a question on the photos. Since I am a single man I feel I need to prove myself more because this is primarily a site for couples. Should I have more sexier photos? Mysterious? What style of photos should I have?

Hi. Mostly good. You can lose all your public photos except the one of the partly unbuttoned shirt. That one is great, the others not so much.

Your profile still has a few typos (I see several places with an "i" that should be an "I," for instance), but the biggest issue is the visual one of separate sentences that don't flow into paragraphs but also aren't sufficiently offset with enough white space. Maybe work on your paragraphing and then insert open space in between them? I think that will help erase the feeling of choppiness that I'm currently getting.

Otherwise I have a few quibbles, but nothing major and nothing that needs to be fixed.

Nice job on creating a profile that fairly represents you. Good luck.

Hi. I have been in the lifestyle and revised my profile with new pics. I would appreciate critiques and read forums regularly. Thank you.