Final Recommendations ?

I like what you’ve got-I would replace the first picture with the fifth picture of you walking towards the camera in the desert.

Your profile will change as your situation and desires change - so no recommendations are ever really final!

As far as the immediate recommendations - Description is still very wordy and its structure is awkward. Try to tighten it up, consolidate or leave some things out and put it in paragraph format like your other sections. It will make everything easier to read.

I'm not really good on dealing with the picture software here - but you have two public galleries now and one appears to be a partial duplicate of the other. And your default gallery has quite a few duplicate pictures in it. You'll need to figure out how to delete the duplicates - ask tech support for help if necessary. If I were you I'd toss many of your pictures - they are great for showing where you've been but aren't really good for your profile. I'd keep #4 (smiling with ruins in distance), #9 (in a cave?), either #12 or #13 (hiking/climbing in desert) and maybe #2 (artsy b&w).

I still think you'll do fine - your profile is already better than many.

~Phoebert's Wife

Lose the serious perplexed "look" photos along with the group photos and add more smiling friendly ones. Also, consider cutting half your written profile as most will lose interest before reaching the end. Good luck!

I have had some great feedback and expert advice...please let me know what you think!