Critique my profile.

Thanks for all feedback everyone. I will make good use of your suggestions.

Hi. Lucky you. I have four minutes and you get all of it.

While I appreciate the lengths you've gone to make your profile less about you and more about others, you've also managed to pretty much strip out all personality as well.

Married men playing separately are my thing, for a lot of reasons, including that they're happily married and unlikely to be clingy. Your profile somehow manages to indicate you'll be one of the few exceptions and I'm not entirely certain why. It may just be a little too much insistence on the friends part of friends with benefits. In the absence of much personality, that's going to stand out in fairly high relief.

Fantasies is particularly egregious in that you've laid a heavy beat on the word "friends" and in the one place where sex could be coming out to play, you ignore sex.

Also, it's let's rather than lets.

So, put some personality in - who are you? - and position yourself as a slightly more sexual creature than you are and then come back here for a review.

Your profile is kind of "meh" and there's nothing there to really entice me. Looks like you're fit and you run a bit but not much else about you as a person. And it reads as if you want friends more than benefits - surely you have a fantasy beyond intimate comfortable environment for getting to know people. Some profiles are too much sex - you've gone too far in the other direction!

If your wife will verify that she approves of your playing you should mention that. See if you can include a bit more about yourself because right now I have no idea what we'd talk about. Eventually you could replace the bare-chested selfie with a pool or beach photo taken by your wife - it's not bad as selfies go but there's no reason for the bare chest. And Velma is right about a "date" photo - right now I'd almost expect you to show up in runners shorts!

Good Luck!

~Phoebert's Wife

I guess I reviewed your profile before-honestly I think it’s the best it’s going to be as a married man playing alone.

About the only thing I would do is put up a date picture. I don’t think you have to go as far as a suit and tie-look at my profile and look at the picture of my husband wearing jeans and a white shirt. Maybe something like that?

Looking for feedback on my profile. What needs improvement?