Critique my profile

Spelling and grammar:

When you speak of yourself, I is always capitalized, not i. I'm requires an apostrophe. It is not im or Im. When you mean Instant Messaging, it's IM.

Say "Due to my work, discretion is a must." Cheaters wants discretion, too. You should make it clear, this is about your job, not because you have a girlfriend or wife.

In Fantasies:

night on the town

brought back and taken by both of us (typo)

I get the sense that English might not be your first language. If you're Hispanic and you speak Spanish, why not put a note in Spanish at the bottom of the profile? Other Spanish speakers will see it and can respond.

Hi and welcome. I'll just get straight to it and say you need spell check on your profile and on every single email you send if you want to make a good impression. With this many typos, it doesn't matter what you say, because most people will reject you just for sheer sloppiness.

As for the rest, you need some more content if you want to reach (and by reach, I mean fuck) as many people as possible. Because right now you're only going to appeal to folks who want a young stud with a hot body to be a stunt cock and then leave, never to be heard from again. That's not a tiny pool, but it's not so big either.

So, your tagline. It's not funny, it has a lol (no to that) and it puzzles me. But, hey, if you're signaling something with "I'm back," that's great. Maybe add a few extra a's into back.

In Looking For, I'd change females to women, add an "and" in between that and couples and maybe think about what you'd like to do with those women and couples. Do you want to notch as many bedposts as is humanly possible, go to parties, make friends, something else? This is the place for that.

In Description, don't bother talking about your body, since your photos can do a much better job of that, plus your height is already listed in your stats. I like what you've added (I looked earlier, but my comment was eaten by gremlins or something), because it helps make you relatable, plus it adds some of that information about what you want to do with your playmates that I asked about above. If by clean you mean disease free, then say that. Also, I think it's a mistake to say "trust me." I'm probably an edge case in that I automatically say no to that demand, just like I wonder if someone who starts a sentence with "To be honest" is lying. But still, lots of women have probably heard "trust me" only to find out that doing so wasn't the best option.

Fill out the other two sections. It doesn't have to be much, but it does need to be something. You don't want to leave the impression that you're not thorough, do you?

Best of luck and, yeah, come back with changes and let us review what you've done.

So the first tip is to take some new pictures.

Bathroom pictures rarely flatter anyone. The lighting is bad, the bathroom is usually dirty.

If you are in Enterprise, Alabama, and Hispanic, I'm going to take a guess that you are military at Ft. Rucker. If I could figure that out, so can your commanding officer. So the second piece of advice I have for you is to tread lightly. Adultery is still illegal in the Army. Be careful who you play with because the Army could really nail you to the wall if they wanted to. I'm an Army Brat, so I know a little bit about this stuff.

You have a nice body. I suggest you take a trip down to Panama City this weekend with a couple of buddies and take some pictures at the beach. That will look far better than a bathroom selfie. Take a change of clothes with you and take some nice pictures at an outdoor bar wearing a loose linen shirt or a guayabera. Don't put any pics up of you in uniform.

I'd also add some hobbies in there. I want to think you are interesting. Maybe you like a sports team from your hometown? Maybe you like craft beers or flamenco dancing? Be interesting.

My suggestion is to make the changes and then repost with the new pictures so we can take a look again.

Hello. I’m just starting out on here. Seeing if some professionals can critique my profile and or pictures