Profile help

Phoenix, AZ, Us

There is a whole section and it's called Better Profiles. If you don't get a lot of answers here, try asking the same question there in a day or two. In the meantime, here's my take:

First, I'd change your profile default photo. It gives a nice view of your biceps, but the setting is a little busier than you want if your aim is to attract attention.

In Looking For, you have the correct components, but you'd be better served by using complete sentences.

In Description, you can lose the part about drama (nobody who brings the drama thinks they bring the drama) or pain (if I want you to smack my ass once, will you really say no?). Otherwise, it's not horrible, but it doesn't really give much of a sense of you. Right now you're Single Man version 18b, based on what you have here, and I'm thinking there is more to you than that. So, give a snapshot of yourself here. Who are you? What do you like to do? What makes you special? You needn't approach the length of a novel, but do be more forthcoming.

Fantasies is okay. Again, the way it's written is a little low key and complete sentences would be a definite improvement.

What is in Additional comments would be better in Description, because this is the kind of personal detail that's missing. Don't leave this section blank, though.

Oh, and your tagline needs an initial capital letter. Plus, once you've made your final changes, whenever that may be, and gotten them approved, go in and change your smoking and drinking toggles. And, yes, you have to do it in that order or they just reset back to Want Smokers/Drinkers.

Good luck. I hope other people weigh in, because you'd benefit from a more vibrant profile and the ideas of others would probably help you with that.

Summerville, SC, Us

There is a whole section of the forum for that question

South Holland, IL, Us

How can I make a more appealing profile without it becoming a novel!! LOL! Any suggestions surely appreciated.