What would you change?

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. If you're read through other threads, you probably know it asking for a profile review can be a little like entering a cage match. This is where I apologize, because unlike the others who responded, I don't think your profile is fine. It's not terrible, but it's Generic Couple v.2C and I suspect there's more to you than that. Also, your photos are way too much T&A and way too little "ooh, hot couple I'd like to get to know." My explanation is that I'm not a guy, I have my own tits and ass and am unimpressed with those belonging to others (unimpressed doesn't mean uninterested, just that photos of same do nothing for me). Also there are too many of them and I was bored long before I got to the end. You're way too pretty a couple to want to elicit boredom, so maybe pare them down and take a few outdoor shots of the two of you in street clothes.

Your tagline could use some work. Why would you even mention your age? It's like a thing that people over 50-something seem compelled to do and it just baffles me. You have photos and certs saying you're hot. Forget about your age.

In Looking For, it's women and men. I realize I'm fighting a losing battle on a site that doesn't value grammar (or good programming or graphics or, really, much of anything), but the words female and male modify nouns but are not themselves nouns. Otherwise, it's fine. Not particularly inspiring, but it's fine. I think it would be improved if you'd remove the desire for a taller man, because you mention it elsewhere and you also have the option of just saying sorry not a match to shorter guys, and added some content that sounded more definite about what you're looking for in these theoretical playmates.

In Description, you do a really good job of sounding relatable and active. I'd just merge the first two (Maybe? There's no punctuation, so maybe you mean it to just be one) sentences/phrases and start by saying how long you've been married and then that you're snowbirds or whatever. You can leave it the way it is or give it one more try at sounding unique (everyone is).

Fantasies is awkwardly phrased. Also it sounds like you're unsure about swinging in general and swapping in particular, which, since you've been on the site for nearly three years, is a bit of a red flag. Also, life's too (two o's) short.

Additional comments is fine, but I'd just lose the ALL CAPS INSTRUCTION, not least because it's a useful filtering device. Who is interested in starting a conversation with someone who can't be arsed to send a photo with the first interaction?

Anyway, I don't hate your profile, but I think you can do a better job of standing out from the crowd.

Athens, TN, Us

she is sexy, profile looks great to us

Fresno, CA, Us

Your actually looking pretty good, profile-wise. You're fairly clear about what you want, you have your info in the proper places, you've included some non-sexual hooks to show that you're interesting people and allow folks to make a personal connection. Your public photos are mostly pretty good, although there are a couple of blurry or dark pics that should probably be replaced with others. I'd also include a few more of him to balance out the photos of her, and adjust the photo order so that some of his photos are higher up in the queue. When scrolling through, I started thinking "oh wow, another couple profile with no pics of him", but I kept going until seeing his pics. Some other folks may not have the patience to scroll through to the end, so get a couple of his pics in there sooner. You have a few grammatical errors/oddities, but nothing too bad.

Good luck!

Perfect. Pics are??????????.Description
Is perfect. Wouldn't change a thing but location.??

Vero Beach, FL, Us

Have read through some of the other profile suggestions and thought we’d give it a try. What do you think?