Profile suggestions please

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi and welcome. Velma consistently gives good advice on photos and if you're lucky, she'll give it to you. My only contribution to the conversation is usually something like "oh, please god, do not prominently feature your cock."

For the rest, onward:

Your tagline needs help. First, it's Louis Vuitton and when I think Louis Vuitton (only happens when I'm at the dentist and all they have to read are glossy magazines), I think luggage. I really don't know what to do with the image of a gentleman in a suitcase.

Looking For is fine, but it needs a little more content. What do you mean by like minded? Maybe lose that rather overused phrase and spell out what you're looking for. In Description, your syntax is a little labored, but it will do, except the part about being a professional philosopher. That era ended with Marcuse, so it's probably not true. Also, you don't want an "a" in front of humble, work out is two words and "of anyone I speak with" is common usage, but it's grammatically suspect and you can just lose it without changing the meaning of the sentence.

In Fantasies, it's hang out, one of your fantasies rather than fantasy, and the line about intellectual stimulation belongs in either Description or Additional comments. I'd say the latter, because what you have there now should be the last paragraph in Fantasies.

I think that and some good photos will be enough, but come back when you've made changes and let us review your profile again.

Good luck.

Dear friends,

I am new and would very much appreciate a random set of eyes to provide suggestions on How I could improve my profile. How many pictures are sufficient? What kind? Are NSFW pics desirable or deal breaker?

Cheers