profile review - how to improve . help needed

Thank you all for the feedbacks, much appreciated.
Got some good points to work on and to improve.

I hope I can do a better job this time ...

Tal

In a nutshell, the categories are asking a question that you are answering. For example, under "Looking For" should be what YOU are looking for.

Sounds obvious, but if you read what you wrote under each heading you'll see there is text that's more appropriate under a different heading.

Thought that might be easier rather than telling you to move specific things and will help you in the future if you choose to add more to your profile.

Pictures:
When you do take a picture in the bathroom, take everything off the countertops. Have a friend take pictures. Have at least one picture taken in formalwear (jacket, shirt, tie, slacks, everything properly pressed and clean)

Looking for:

The first two lines of your "Looking for" are about you.

Move the first line to Description and the second line to "Real Experiences."

Write at least one line about what you are looking for in a single female.

Description:

"consider myself A passionate man" you missed the word "a" in that sentence.

You've said you were intelligent, you don't need to repeat that you are "smart." We get it.

You should write about something you enjoy other than having sex. This will make you not so flat as a person, and give people something to talk about when you first meet. What do you enjoy doing?

Fantasies and experiences:
What have you done? What do you want to do?

Hi. Welcome. If you're trying to attract women, the bathroom selfie and the shot of you in your underwear can go. If you can recreate that bathroom selfie outdoors, without the camera showing, that would make a great profile photo. I'm probably weird, but I've seen so many male torsos that one that's decently clothed attracts my attention. Really, though, if you could have a friend take some photos of you, that would be great.

You have a big giant red flag working against you. You've been a member for more than six years and you don't have a certification. That's kind of the kiss of death for single men.

Other than that, reading your profile out loud will get rid of the some of the grammatical errors. Our ear for a language develops before our eye, so that will help you eliminate some of the issues. Being specific and organized will help as well. Right now in Looking For, you describe yourself (there's a section for that) and your experience (there's a section for that too). Also, you've selected that you're interested in single women, but you only mention couples.

You should mention what country you are from or that English is a second language, preferably in Description. That will buy you some extra leeway from people like me who judge sloppily written profiles harshly.

And fill out those blank sections. You're selling yourself, or at least doing some marketing, and you want to take every opportunity offered to explain why someone should play with you.

Make some changes and if you like, I'll help correct any remaining errors.

Good luck.

Would love to get some review and feedbacks on my profile.
I'm not American so I guess my English is not that great either.

Thanks !!!
Tal