Profile advice

Ok, I will take care of that. Thanks for all the help everyone.

I always recommend writing your profile in Google Docs or Word and copypasting into SLS. I even do this with longer forum posts.

It also gives you a backup of your profile.

You still have a couple minor grammer issues. If you cut/paste the whole thing into Google Docs (which is free) it will highlight those for you.

Made some final changes. I believe we are good here. If not, let me know. If so, thank you everyone for your help!

MUCH better!

I saw both iterations and this is better. You still need a spell check ( bbqs, hubby's) and something else in Additional comments (block single men and you won't hear from them), which will give you an opportunity to end on a high note.

Anyway, what you have now is fine. Best of luck.

TheBentleyCouple - "Actually I don’t recall sex even being mentioned."

I think I caught it between updates. When I first looked, there was nothing but sex mentioned. After you make a change, it has to be approved before the update is posted.

It does look a bit better now. The "...hang out around fires, have bbq’s and play yard and board games..." is something we can relate to. When we first meet people, we like there to be some sort of activity where we can get to know people a bit before taking things to the bedroom, if all decide to head in that direction.

We changed our entire profile. A short while ago and it has been updated systematically.
I don’t recall anything about just wanting sex. Actually I don’t recall sex even being mentioned. Moot point now.
Yes it was a mess. I am usually more organized and careful of wording. I believe it looks better. Maybe not fantastic, but better.

I agree with P&B. Beyond your pictures, the Description section is where you get to try to attract people. It's attractive to know that you have other common interests with someone besides just sex, as well as that being fodder for potential online conversation starters.

While this is a site to look for people to find others to have sex with, IMHO, most want more than just that. The gist of this to ask yourselves if what you have in your profile makes you look and sound like fun people, and be able to answer "Why".

To get ideas for this, if you look at someone else's profile and say, "Hey, they look and sound fun", see if you can define why that is and incorporate that into your profile.

Welcome - and I hope you've read some other reviews. We really do want to help but sometimes we're a bit opinionated.

I'm generally the kinder, gentler blunt reviewer but you really need to do a rewrite of your profile text.

My biggest issue is that you don't pay attention to the section headers. Under Looking For you spend most of your time telling us about yourselves. You've got three other sections for you - Looking For is the one place you need to concentrate on others. What sort of people do you want to play with (outdoor types, dancing fools, sports enthusiasts) and what sort of relationship do you want (FWB, NSA, one & done)?

Your physical description is really not helpful - that's what your photos are for. Tell us about what makes you fun and interesting people in Description. Any sexy bits can go in Experience/Fantasies. And your tag line is your first opportunity at enticement - what you have just annoys me.

What you have might work, but it's not showing you to good advantage. Spend some time thinking about the implied question in each section header then rearrange your text so it fits.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

Lovely couple. Pics are great. Very tasteful.

We are new and would like some advice on our profile. Any advice on wording, pics or approach would be greatly appreciated.