Seven - In addition to what P&W said, your Looking For section doesn't tell me what you want to do with the people you are looking for once you find them.
Likewise, the Fantasies/Experience section doesn't define what are fantasies and what are experiences. Judging by the certs, a lot of people have figured this out on their own, but it never hurts to include and/or be clear about this sort of info.
I don't have a lot of time but my gut feeling is that you've got it covered rather well - but a little pruning wouldn't hurt.
First thing - delete the two warnings at the end, they are meaningless and paint you as gullible.
Second - physical description isn't really necessary, that's what photos are for. And within your text you've got some repetition happening.
It might help to copy your text to a word processor and rearrange so that you have several short paragraphs in each section rather than the current list of mostly one-liners. Your profile text just needs to entice not tell everything - keep some things for messages and in person discussions.
Have fun and stay safe!
~Phoebert's Wife
I just want to make sure that my profile isn't lacking anything it may need.
Please review!
