There seem to be a language barrier. Your sexual needs is not appealing because of the choice of words and how it's being used in the sentence. Shorten the sentences by replacing some words with basic words & take out others as suggested in the replies. Can also mention your bilingual or more, & English is not your native language. Good luck and happy hunting.
Hopefully someone else will chime in because I'm not going to say much different than MsMolly. I'm not even sure I'll live up to my reputation of the kinder, gentler version of blunt. I read your profile shortly after you posted this request, said "hell NO" and went back to cleaning the oven - it seemed less stressful at the time.
You can probably re-read MsMolly's post and pretend I said all the same things.
While this is a swinger site and we're all here looking for sex - our reasons for wanting to have sex with a particular person aren't always strictly sexual. So making your profile all about sex doesn't necessarily attract women. Your forceful, vaguely threatening, language is quite off-putting - and some of that might be cultural (I get the impression that English is not your native language).
So - read a LOT of other profiles to see what couples and single ladies here are looking for. If you cannot meet their needs this might not be the place for you. If you can meet their needs, then your profile needs a complete rewrite - it's not all about you and sex. Looking for is about the type of couples and single ladies that appeal to you and the type of connection you hope to make, Description is about your personality and what you do for fun, Fantasies/Experience is about what you generally like or want to try sexually (no need for an explicit list of everything) and Add'l Comments is what doesn't fit elsewhere (ability to host, distance willing to travel, etc).
And if you haven't already done so - read Velma's post at the top of this forum about her DEBauCH system for core photos for your public gallery.
Good luck, have fun and stay safe!
~Phoebert's Wife
Hi. I'm going to be really blunt about your profile and it might be uncomfortable. My intentions are benign, though it might not feel like it.
So, basically, your profile makes me want to run away. It's too intense, the language is charged in a way that I find uncomfortable, and you don't seem to have a "mellow" setting, which you kind of have to have as a third, and that's before I get to some of the structural issues.
First, tagline - not only do I not know what you mean, use of the word "passionate" isn't my idea of a good start. I mean, be good at sex, but I only want passion within my relationships, not as a part of casual sex. Probably not alone there.
In Looking For, it's the same general issue. Spoiling? No, thank you. Also, unspeakable climaxes? Again, don't know exactly what you mean, but it's not a positive response being engendered. Instead, use clear language, use plurals (couples and women), and make this section about them, not you. So, the part about group situations, etc., doesn't belong here.
Description is meant to be about the vanilla you. Sex goes in Fantasies. So, other than being well-traveled, I know nothing about you as a person, partly because I don't know what "driven maker" means. And the rest of what you have, again, makes me super uncomfortable. You sound thirsty, vaguely threatening (you're going to use my body as a toy? Get out.), and as if you don't really understand the process and purpose of casual sex. Clue: the word "casual" is there for a reason. Also, you've made a lot of extravagant promises and women are generally super skeptical about that shit, since those who brag generally don't impress once the clothes come off.
So, please, just talk about your hobbies and a little about your character in this section. Also, let your photos do the job of describing any physical properties.
In Fantasies, please tone it down. A couple of paragraphs that don't do a thorough survey of all your likes is sufficient. Also, please don't mention the trunk of your car. Because, again, that could be read as threatening. Also, if you're going to express an interest in orgies, use that word instead of "partouze."
Additional comments is, again, thirsty, plus you didn't proofread, since I'm guessing you're trying to convey that you can't wait, and saying you will bite is, again, potentially a threat.
So, short version is I truly dislike your profile and rather than find it inviting, it makes me want to run away. Unless you're a secret serial killer, you should probably rethink your entire approach, including understanding that what you're currently offering isn't generally what women in the lifestyle are looking for.
I hope you make some changes that make you sound...solid and sane, and then come back for a review. Good luck.
Hello there! Would someone review my profile? I would like to increase my chance to success on the website. I would allow you to access my private photos, so you are able to review them as well. Thanks a bunch!
