Looking for some pointers

Fort Payne, AL, Us

Your profile is better than most single gentlemen and just needs some tweaking.

You may want to copy all the text into a word processor and run a spell check and grammar check to catch the worst of the problems. Some rearranging so your text matches the section categories wouldn't hurt but isn't essential.

But definitely delete the warning - it makes you look gullible.

If you cannot find someone to take pictures for you then see if your phone camera has a timer and prop it up somewhere (or get a tripod for it). Make sure to smile and watch for clutter and visual chaos in the background.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi there. I mostly like your profile, but I do have some suggestions to make it a little better and am just going to be blunt about the whole thing. It's kindly meant though.

First, your default photo (public bathroom?) isn't good. I get the impulse to use a large mirror, but bathrooms aren't photogenic and the whole bathroom selfie thing is just a tragic cliche. So, please upgrade.

Your tagline is okay, but if you've used it for awhile, it's time for a change there too.

I mostly like Looking For. You've kind of ignored the categories, but it works. You just need to fix a few things. It's you're not your uptight, there is no bird any longer, so get rid of that and go straight to being up for adventure, and there's only one p in probably.

In Description, don't capitalize cars, and put a comma between life and all around. It gives a good sense of you though and you seem light hearted and fun, so that's a plus.

Fantasies is also good, but it's got some weird formatting issue that you should probably fix.

In Additional comments, please lose that stupid, stupid warning. I won't go into the reasons why unless you need further convincing, but otherwise trust me that it's stupid. Also, don't start sentences with numbers, write them out, so it's Four, and starting a sentence with Again makes me think you've said it somewhere else, which you haven't, so lose that too. Plus, it's dick pics not picks.

Basically, you could add a little here and there, but mostly fix your typos and freshen things up a little. Me, I'd use more commas, but unlike needing a new photo or two, it's not a big deal.

Good luck.

RonKathyVeteran
Woodstock, GA, Us

You are a good looking guy.. ditch all the selfies.. more of you in nice casual clothes... a dress up outfit and incorporate a nice smile.. bam !

You have the confidence now have someone .. friends, neighbors take those photos.. !

As far as the reading in profile we will let others comment.. but good luck.. vet all and always keep it classy!

Rochester, NY, Us

Just looking for some advice as a single guy on this site in regards to my profile. Any positive input is welcome. Thanks for your time.