Just another guy requesting a profile review

Phoenix, AZ, Us

I'm taking you at your word.

I do not like your profile and think it needs substantial revision. At the same time, you have a fair number of glowing certs, so it's clearly not turning off others. But you could do better.

Let's start with your toggles: There are very few single women with paid profiles here. Even if you don't reach out or turn them down, you're still better off showing equal interest in women and couples.

In your certs, I'd suggest deleting the two that focus on oral skills. It might not mean that, but I suspect the general understanding of that phrasing is that you couldn't get hard but still were very satisfactory. Since that would not be what some women are looking for, you're better off without those two references.

Your tagline isn't particularly interesting and you just repeat it with a slight variation in Looking For. Not very imaginative. Try for something clever there instead or at least not informative.

In Looking For, you've focused on yourself. You have three sections for that. This one is meant to be about who you're looking for and what you're looking for with them. As you rewrite this portion of your profile, notice how many times you use the word "I," because more than a few times means you have more work to do.

Yeah, you're in this for yourself - me too - but make a place for the people you are hoping to meet. Right now, it's like having someone come to the front door and instead of welcoming them in you blast them with a firehose of information about you. I'd write you off as a selfish lover based on what's there now.

Take the positives that you think are critical for others to know about you - most aren't, not here - and drop them into the other sections. The parts about MM contact and barebacking either need to be talked about in person or phrased in a different way, because right now you've turned off some segment of the population who wouldn't dream of suggesting m/m play to a straight guy or one who barebacks, no matter how carefully.

Description is good. I'd just get rid of the last sentence and make the previous two one sentence.

In Fantasies, it's lose interest, no one is going to love the part about what you like in your women, and wtf is with the being intimidated by your profile thing about? Add inexplicably cocky sounding to selfish.

And you get the play style/party thing in either Looking For or Fantasies, not both.

Additional comments is funny, but a little long. However, it's a better representation of you than what's in the preceding sections. So it has that going for it.

As far as photos, if you have seven unique galleries, you could probably manage more than one default pic. I'd go for adding a full length, clothed one with you smiling. Smiles matter to women.

That's all I have at the moment, but if you want another review after you make some changes, I hope you come back here.

Best of luck.

Fort Payne, AL, Us

I haven't had much coffee yet so details may have escaped me but your profile looks pretty good to me. Yeah - there's some repetition that could be eliminated and some missing punctuation but those are easily fixed and minor.

The biggest problem is your photo. If you have only one public photo then for Pete's sake make it one with a smile!

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

mayhem8Veteran
Auburn, NH, Us

You have a little bit of repetition between the Looking For and Fantasies/Experience sections, but other than that, it looks OK to me. You could flesh out your gallery and preferably with pictures showing a big smile and a full body shot, but it otherwise looks OK to me. Others may have more to offer.

West Palm Beach, FL

I would greatly appreciate a review of my profile. Please be blunt. Please feel free to be brutal as long as the comments are genuine. I've got a thick skin & I don't get insulted easily. I would like to learn as much as I can about the way my profile presents me to others.

Thanks,
J