funforallxallforfun - My go-to for word processing is Google Docs. It's free, required no installation (Web-based) and picks up both typos and grammer. You can just cut/paste your whole profile into it and let it identify most of the issues, then you can cut/paste the corrected text back to your profile.
BTW - Nice job on the updates.
Really, who would have thought. ;)
Seriously though, technology is your friend and can make up for having paid zero attention in those classes so long as you're reasonably clear thinkers, which you are.
I really like the photo edit. You look like a fun couple.
Thanks you kindly for the inputs and your time. Updated our profile and removed some pictures. Need to get some new photos of both of us uploaded still. Tried my best with the profile but not paying attention in English class in school doesn't help. Who would of thought! Lol
I saw and meant to comment on the smoking thing, but GGMM picked up on it. If you do a search of all couples in your area, make note of the # returned, then do the same search with the setting "Smokers? No", you'll get an idea of the impact.
Hi. It's not that you're not attractive. Smoking is an issue for some people, so that decreases your chances a little, but you could probably make some improvements in your profile too and have slightly better luck (hardly anyone has great luck with online searching).
I'd start by pruning your photos, focusing on the ones where you're together and both smiling or at least she's smiling and he isn't looking grim. And if you haven't changed your tagline recently, now's the time.
In terms of text, you could do better. Like, just mention couples and women in Looking For, not in three of the four sections.
In the rest of that section, I'd suggest getting rid of the last sentence, which has slightly weird syntax and maybe indicates you want a lot of texting before meeting. Substitute something else or leave it shorter.
In Description, I don't really care about any of that, except maybe starting out "Strong loving couple." Instead, say a little bit about yourselves as a couple and as individuals. This section goes better if it's about your interests and hobbies rather than sex and gives readers an idea of what you might be like.
Fantasies doesn't do the job, which is to attract others. Instead of what you have - and please don't mention couples and women again - say a little about your experience and a fairly tame fantasy or two.
Read Additional comments aloud and run a spell check, then fix the issues.
I'd be interested to see what you come up with, so I hope you come back for an additional review once you've made some changes.
Best of luck.
Your "Looking For" section does at least give me a decent idea of what you're looking for, but none of the other sections tell me much about you. For example, under Description I would hope to see what things you do for fun besides just sex. This allows people to see if they have other things in common with you and potentially start conversations.
Same with Fantasies/Experiences. What you have there tells me little to nothing about either of those things. You open yourself up to a lot by saying, "Not very much off the table". Does that mean she is up for anal, DVP, DP, gangbangs, golden showers, or any/all of the above? You don't have to be graphically specific, but some general idea of both is helpful. For example, something like, "Have done a few FFMs, MFMs and MFMFs. Would love to attend a swinger party sometime and try group play.".
In the lifestyle (LS) there is generally someone for everyone, but not everyone is into BBWs, so that could limit you a little. Luckily (IMHO) there are probably more guys into BBW than there are women into BBM.
You have a number of pictures of her and there appear to be substantial differences between a lot of them. Perhaps get rid of a few and focus on just a few of the better more recent ones.
I do see you've been a member since Jan 2022. Have you had luck in the past and things dropped off? If Yes, changing up the pictures can help, or you can just look to see if there are any LS parties in your area and attend those. You'll likely be a lot more successful at those than online. Either way, it will never hurt to spruce up your profile a bit.
Many of the profile help suggestions are somewhat generic, so it wouldn't hurt to look at some of the other replies for profile help and use what applies to you.
Hey all. Having problems finding dates. Don't know if it's out profile or if we are just not attractive.
