Help with profile

Hi. I meant to get to this hours ago, but I've had the kind of day where rage or laughter are the only possible responses. Luckily, I'm a laugher.

PAW gave you the disclaimer, so I won't repeat it, except I do want to underscore that our motives are benign. What I will do is mostly repeat her advice.

Looking For is meant to be about the people you're looking for. So, confine yourself to mostly talking about them. Consider leaving this out entirely: "...and/or help fulfill that deep passion a woman may have been supressing for so long." It's both over the top and a little insulting, which I'm pretty sure isn't your intent.

Description is a good place to say you've been in the lifestyle for six years. And while it's okay to mention sex, it really is better left to the next section. Use this one to talk about yourself as the well rounded person who will show up to that first meeting. We all know this is about sex but people who contact you or say yes to you will mostly do so because you've interested them in some way, so do that.

Fantasies is also where you talk your experience. So, maybe something like this: In my years in the lifestyle, I've had a lot of experiences with some amazing single women and couples. And then lightly touch on a fantasy or two.

Additional comments is both where the stuff that doesn't have another logical home goes - like your desire to attend parties - and a last chance to charm and interest others.

Your tagline isn't very exciting, but it will do. Just change it periodically, along with a new photo,or two.

And speaking of photos, please, no selfies. Do consider a few photos of yourself nicely dressed to go along with the beach bum photo.

Good luck. Makes some changes and come back for another look.

If you haven't read many other profile reviews here, please be aware that most replies will tend towards blunt and might sound mean. Please don't take it personally - it's all about your profile. We genuinely want to help you improve your profile so you get the results you hope for.

And you probably should read some other profile reviews - you'll see a lot of the same information over and over again. And some of it will be useful for improving your profile.

You have a few bits in Looking For that don't really belong there but I like the rest of it. Either move or delete the info about liking parties & clubs and being drama free, clean, & open minded. Perhaps add if you prefer FWB, ongoing or one time encounters.

I'd probably move most of what you have in Description to Fantasies/Experience so that leaves you needing to tell us about you. We're all here for sex so that's not really what will attract me to you. Are you dancing all night at the club, listening to jazz and drinking wine or cheering on your team with a beer? Do you want to go water skiing, snow skiing, hiking to waterfalls or rock climbing? Will you binge watch Star Trek or laugh at a romantic comedy?

All the sexy bits should go in Fantasies/Experience so we know what you've liked in the past and what's still on your bucket list.

Please delete the naked mirror selfie - your other photo is a much more appealing way to show off your body. A few pictures nicely dressed and/or having fun will round out your public gallery. Look for Velma's advice to single gentlemen if she doesn't pop by. Hopefully you have a private gallery with face pics that you open when contacting others; save the nudity for a private gallery that you open upon request.

Good luck and have fun!

~Phoebert's Wife

I'm looking for some constructive criticisms about my profile and maybe suggestions on how i can make it read better to help attract potential playmates. BBC here . Any help would do. Thank in advance Swing World.