Help with profile

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. Standard disclaimer: Anything said here that seems mean isn't meant to be mean. Instead, it's just a blunt assessment meant to help you discern and remove the roadblocks to getting what you want.

So, first, we want what we want but your age range is less than half your age to nine years older. I would suggest raising that age range to something a little more expansive on the top end (because it's a bit of an eye roller) and then doing what everyone else does, which is to decide attraction on a case by case basis.

Your tagline isn't great, but it isn't terrible. You just need to capitalize the first letter and get rid of the period. Change it and your default photo every six months or so if you can.

Oh, and on photos, if Velma doesn't show up with specific advice, you'll have to make do with mine, which is to have at least one full body clothed photo of you smiling. It's really better if you can have several, including either interesting backgrounds or your doing something interesting.

Looking For is not meant to be about you. It's about the people you're looking for and then what you are looking for with them. Not graphic detail, but are you looking for ongoing or something else. What you have in this section now can all go.

Description currently contains things better served by your stats and photos and confuses me with its two sentences about not being a pest. I'm not sure why that information is there. I mean, yes, I understand that single men have a reputation of having poor social manners, but the reason that raises a certain amount of ill will is that adults are meant to have good social manners and they're violating the contract. I'd just get rid of this bit and the similar section in Additional comments.

Instead of wasting this space by inviting people to ask if they want to more, do a good job of talking about yourself. What kind of person are you? What are your interests? Who is going to show up at that first meeting? That's what goes in this section. Oh, and don't talk about your dick. If anyone wants to know about your endowment, they'll ask, I promise.

Fantasies punts. Do you have any? Don't be graphic, but this is a chance to be relatable so don't waste it. And if you have experience, say something about that, particularly with threesomes.

Additional comments currently seems less than charming and confident. Maybe it will work better once you removed that not pushy thing, but right now it doesn't serve you well.

Maybe make some changes and come back for a review?

Good luck!

Northbrook, IL, Us

Take a look and let me have it. Thanks for your time and comments.