Help Please my prfile

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Well, I already gave you my general opinion, which is that your profile is standard issue middle aged single man and is doing you no favors.

For the specifics, in Looking For, the only unusual thing in your entire profile is that reference to a roots girl. I don't know what it means, but I think I like it. However, it probably should be "roots girls," so, plural and with the comma inside the parenthesis. Completely lose the line about if you're not what they're looking for. Nobody needs encouragement to move on and they mostly won't be letting you know.

In Description, the whole "Love to please...sensual woman" is what. every. single. man. says. So, it's a cliche of epic proportions, plus it doesn't describe you, so it doesn't belong here. If you must include it, do so at the end, in Additional comments, where you've left some valuable real estate unused. This is the section where you say things about yourself that differentiate you from other single men. What do you like to do when you aren't fucking? What makes you the valuable, interesting and unique man that you are? Why choose you instead of him or him or even that other guy?

In Fantasies, it's commonly referred to as an FMF, not a WMeW, which made me think of wrestling, which, okay, might be a turn on for some, except for the fakery. And this is also the section where you say you're new (which any woman who has been on SLS for more than a minute will already know, btw).

Maybe make some changes and let us know?

I know my profile is mad. Be critical. Whats needed? Have gotten good advise on pics in profile, like have one with your cloths on.