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Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. I'm going to be blunt and I'll trust you to be chill.

Let's start with your photos. You're cute, they're terrible. Please put your clothes on and smile. No weird faces, no towels, no dicks. Yes, there are people who want to see your body before you meet them. There are private galleries for that - but even then, please smile. It is the single most charming and interesting thing a man can offer.

Looking For is less about what you're looking for and more about who. I mean, yeah, you want to have a good time, but are people interchangeable and you don't really care who you hook up with? So, say something about the people you're looking for.

Also, please don't do philosophy, the way you do here and in Description. Use personal pronouns like "I" and "me" rather than "you," and it'll sound less stuff and finger wagging.

Description has some typos that you should fix, but other than the gym philosophy (no, really, you should hit the gym early rather than being prescriptive for other people), it's good and has that charming bit about being a bad dancer.

In Fantasies, it wouldn't hurt to add a lightly sketched out fantasy still on your bucket list, but what you have - other than the typos that need to be fixed - is good.

Additional comments? Don't leave any sections blank, not even this one. This is like a resume and you want to take every opportunity to encourage others to reach out to you or to say yes when you message them. If you need ideas, I just sketched out some for the other guy who wanted profile advice.

Good luck. Make changes. Come back if you want to refine your profile a little more.

RonKathyVeteran
Woodstock, GA, Us

Welcome.. first get rid of selfies, they are terrible. You look bored in many of your photos.

You have a nice smile show it more in all sorts of photos..Do you have friends, neighbors, anyone who can take a photo.. that in iteslf tells us that you really didnt think about what you post as your swinging resume.

As far as text wording we will let others discuss ... good luck, think about what you advertise for swinging or you will just be "that same old guy" on SLS..

Many woman want a guy who can show he can dress up, dress down while smiling and having fun in life.. good luck you will do fine, and YES swinging well over 25 years successfully with those who put time and effort and have good communication and bed skills.

El Paso, TX, Usa

better profile, can take all the heat