Feedback on my profile

I'm not at the beach but you're not going to get a lot of detail from me either. With ten certs you're obviously doing something right, but yeah - your profile text is lazy and your photos are pretty bad.

Your photos should include your smiling face (it affects your entire body so smile even if you crop or obscure your face), a full body photo of how you might look for a first meeting and unclothed only when it makes sense (beach, pool - NOT your bathroom). A few good ones is all you need to entice people to engage in a message or two.

Your text is repetitious without really telling us anything about you. We're all here for sex so try to emphasize all other, unique things about you. Tell us what you enjoy doing to relax - dancing? concerts? movies? sports? Common interests make it easy to start a conversation - and get a reply. I'm much more likely to respond favorably to "traveling in an RV must have been fun" than to "wanna fuck" - especially if I see the person also likes to travel.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

Hi. I don't usually do profile reviews on my phone, but I'm on a beach, so you get less detail than most. Sorry.

Photos: Awful. I don't want to see your bathroom and no one else does either. And why obscure your face in two of your three photos? Show it or not, but be consistent. And if you can't find anyone else to take pics ( why not?), then use your phone differently, using a timer and the front camera, so it doesn't look like a selfie. Please smile, even if that smile doesn't show up in the public version. Crop don't blob.

The rest of your profile is okay but lazy. You're interested in singles and couples twice in Looking For, your punctuation isn't great, adventure/adventurous are in the same sentence, and there is no reason to give your height and weight in your profile text when it's already right there, in the thumbnail people see before they open it.

So clean it up, run it through a spelling and grammar check, and then make sure you read it closely to make sure you sound interesting.

Good luck.

Better photos, definitely. Clean the mirror before you take a mirror selfie. A little Windex goes a long way. Second photo, you look like maybe you’re going to sleep. Lose the hat. Don’t squint.

Get some pictures in natural light. Either stand next to a window or go outdoors.

I don’t understand why only one picture has your face obscured.

You look handsome, by the way. Show that off. You’ve got a great body, from what I can see. Young and handsome are a premium in the Lifestyle. Lots more old, out-of-shape guys on here like me.

Any advice on what could be fixed on my profile. Maybe better photo ideas or what are things you’d like to know and I’ll write it out