Feedback For Improving My Profile

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Hi. I hope you're okay with bluntness, because that's what is on offer in this section of the forums. It's kindly meant though.

So, first, you need new photos. Not only is your current one disturbingly youthful, you need photos of you taken by others in clothing that fits, at least one full body shot, and no clutter in the background.

Second, taglines are meant to entice people to open your profile and learn about you rather than to be informative. Try for short and clever instead. Also, at 29, you can probably forego calling yourself young.

As for the rest, is English your first language? Because if it is not, please say so somewhere in your profile. The reason is that your syntax is odd and some of what you've written is nearly incomprehensible. Having French as your first language would make that charming instead of vaguely disturbing. Either way, please read what you've written out loud and correct the worst of it.

Looking For is your biggest challenge at the moment. Not only am I unsure of exactly what you're saying because of the syntax errors, it is also unnecessarily convoluted. If you prefer Bi/Bi couples, say so. If that's your ideal but you're also willing to play straight, then make that clear as well. And ongoing instead of one night stands is fine. But do so in a way that is about those other people and not about you. There are four sections in your profile and this is the one that isn't about you except in a very broad sense.

Also, sex related things belong in Fantasies, although I'd be a little less specific about having fetishes even there. It's a word that's currently used more loosely than its definition allows - sexual gratification is tightly tied to and relies on an object or body part in an actual fetish - but you'll have no control over how others interpret the word. So unless you can't have sex without foot worship or whatever, maybe leave that out.

Description is generally good, but I'd leave the last paragraph out and try to look older for your next set of profile pics.

Fantasies is fine although you could wind in that bit that's currently in Looking For.

Please do something more with Additional comments. It really could be anything so long as it ends on a high note or at least a pleasant one.

I hope you make some changes and then come back for more refinements. You seem like an interesting man and it would serve you if that was clearer in your profile.

Good luck.

I always wondered if my profile is not good enough as I try to talk a lot about who I am as I feel couples do wish to know who they are talking with, but I am not sure if that is enough for not since couples all have varying views. So, what could I improve upon?