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To each their own, PhoebertAndWife. We appreciate detailed profiles. Especially with single men we're trying to vet. Saves time chatting.

Agree with the photos comment, however.

Oh dear Lord - I'm not even sure where to begin. Please keep in mind that this is all about your profile, not you personally.

I'm not going to be very specific because I was unable to wade through the wall of text. Usually I can push through a long profile to offer advice but not this time. Most of us are busy and few want to read War and Peace in order to figure out if there is any potential compatibility. So pare it down to the essentials - maybe one or two short paragraphs per section. Keep the tone positive and make sure all text is in the proper section. And one of the stupid warnings is too many - delete them all before you do anything else!

I'm not sure what you've done with one of your pictures - but it's not a good look. Your public gallery should be informative and enticing - especially when you have only a few pictures. Look through previous reviews for Velma's advice on core pictures and remember to smile, watch for clutter or visual chaos in the background and avoid selfies.

Please come back when you've made some edits - generally a second round of advice is helpful when extensive edits are needed.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

That sent before I was ready, but I'm not in the mood to delete and repost, so here's part two:

When you look it up, which you should always do if you're going to cite something, you'll know at least one reason I'm telling you it's all nonsense.

Anyway, once you're done pruning and rewriting, read it out loud to catch where your syntax is a little off or the language drags. And end on a high note. The misplaced bit about how you like to meet in public is a much better way to end than that wall of negativity.

Good luck.

Hi. I hope you've read other threads in this section and are prepared for the rather thoroughgoing bluntness you'll encounter. Even if you're prepared, it can be a bit much. However, it's generally well meant and I hope you take it that way. I'm going to be very blunt.

I'm not sure if your tagline is meant to be amusing or cause for headshaking, but if it's the former, it's a miss.

Looking For is really meant to be not only what you're looking for but whom, and centered on those other folks. You have some of the components here, but you are way too present in this section. You get your chance to talk about yourself in three other places, which gives you ample time to talk about your philosophy of swinging and how you feel about Barbie.

Instead, here maybe prune this down in such a way that people have the space in which to see themselves. And watch your wording, unless it's true that you are fine with couples of all sizes and only interested in single women if they're bbw. Additionally, if your preference really is for 45 and over, change your toggles and don't mention the 35 and under set. Right now, it's confusing.

In Description, you start out by repeating that you are a business traveler, something that doesn't need to be mentioned more than once, so leave it out of Looking For, and make the first of three nods to you being dominating (I believe you mean dominant, unless you're talking about dominating a conversation, which isn't actually a compliment). Once is enough.

Really, this whole section needs pruning. It wanders all over the place and doesn't do a great job of presenting you, because of the wandering. Who are you? What are your hobbies? Try not to duplicate anything or to say things that are self-evident, like that you're east Indian, when the combination of your profile name and your photos make that clear without additional mention.

In Fantasies, it's unlikely anyone will ask you to pee on them so you needn't mention that, nor anything else of what you won't do. I'd also be super cautious about using the word "love" in a profile on a swinger site, especially as a man playing solo. The rest isn't my jam and I found it tedious, but maybe halves of couples will chime in, because it's written for them and they'd be best at evaluating it for effectiveness.

In Additional comments, you've gone full on negative and it's a shit way to end. Also, every single word of that multiplicity of warnings is nonsense and you should remove it all immediately. Also, go look up 18 U.S.C. 2510-2521

I made an attempt to be accurate about me, what I am looking for, experiences, and views.
Appreciate your feedback and comments.

Hope to connect with women and couples with similar interests