Where can we improve?

We have read several other profile reviews and were anticipating your thorough response. Greatly appreciate it and will make those changes immediately. Thank you and all the best to you as well.

Hi. I hope you've looked at other threads in this section and are prepared for blunt talk.

You're looking for a rare bird in the online swinging world: A truly single woman who is interested in a ltr with a couple. That she needs to be beautiful, feminine, and have a lot of self awareness further narrows it down. Lightning does strike, but this particular version is statistically unlikely, at least in part because there are very few single women who bother paying for membership here or on other similar sites.

That said, if you opened your profile to a small sliver of interest in couples, you'd also capture those women who play separately and might be looking for the same thing you are. At the same time, you can block single men entirely, thereby eliminating the need to mention them.

Your tagline has an interesting story embedded in it, but the number nine should be spelled out.

Looking For is okay, and so is Description, but you have some small errors in that one. It's strait laced and outgoing is one word. You could always see about sounding more likeable, because that's not really coming through. You do sound really interesting though, so if that's enough you're fine. If you'd like a little more, try a sentence or two about things you like to do. It not only provides insight, it also gives others a way to continue the conversation with you.

In Fantasies, you should read it out loud, because there are some easily fixed errors.

In Additional Comments, the likeability issue surfaces again. Not only are women not going to line up to message you, but the way you dismiss purveyors of one word or otherwise banal initial messages sounds sour even to me and my profile is pretty clear that anyone doing that probably won't get a response. The last phrase in that first sentence, if you feel you need it after blocking all single men, needs some work if you want the grammar to scan properly.

As far as the WARNING paragraphs, the whole issue is based on a myth. You should remove it, since it's warning an entity that doesn't exist to not do something that isn't legally prohibited in a way that is unenforceable.

I think you're better off on an ENM website than one for swingers. You're also more likely to be successful by continuing to attend in person events, but, regardless, I wish you the best of luck.

We'd like to use this opportunity to utilize community critique. We can always improve and advice from those who have seen success in attracting who they want to meet off this site, would be a huge help. Thank you.