Tips for younger guys

MsMolly has rather eloquently covered problems with your profile so I'm going to just give you some general advice.

Most ladies on SLS that play with single gentlemen have more offers than they care to accept. You have to stand out in a positive manner to even attract their attention. Then you have to capture their interest. Tell us what makes you special, what you like to do, what you want to try. Sex is the least of what's attractive about finding someone here. Everyone is here for sex so tell us the rest of your story as well.

Read Velma's advice about pictures. Put down your phone and find a real keyboard & larger screen so you can actually read your text. You have an odd grasp of sentence structure and punctuation so you'll probably want to run a grammar check more than a spell check but both would be best.

Right now you're essentially walking up to ladies with your dick in your hand - that's not special or attractive - and it paints you as just another single guy hoping for easy sex. If you are truly a swinger that happens to be single then your profile needs a bit of work to be attractive.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

Since this is Better Profiles, I'm going to go with the idea that you mean you'd like tips on your profile here rather than general advice. I'm also going to hope you've read some of the other threads here and are somewhat prepared for the bluntness that might ensue. If not, here's the warning: Please understand that this is about your profile and diplomacy is rarely part of the package.

That out of the way, your dick is probably the least important thing you can bring to the party for half or more of your potential playmates. That means you needn't mention it in your tagline, feature it in your default photo, or otherwise point it at people.

Your tagline should be short, clever if you're up to it, and invite others to open your profile to learn more about you.

Your photos should feature you dressed in well fitting clothing with a smile on your face and your phone nowhere in evidence (so no selfies in front of a mirror). I'm sure you can figure out multiple ways to accomplish that. Dick pics should be in separate private gallery, only opened when requested.

Looking For is meant to be about other people. Who you're looking for, what you're looking for, and written as if people at least kinda sorta matter. It's not about you. That's what the other sections are for. So, basically most of what you have there now goes elsewhere.

Description is currently a waste of space that duplicates things that are already in your stats or talks about your dick. Again, not particularly interesting. What is interesting is who you are as a person. You've already revealed some of that in Looking For, but it's focused way more on what you want sexually than who you are as a man. And this is where I give you the bad news: we're not here for you; you're here for us. There are a lot of single men out there looking for a far smaller group of women who are interested in them and you're probably not going to get what you want, or at least not often, unless you recognize how that dynamic of a hundred men to each available woman actually works.

Fantasies is fine and figure out something to put in Additional comments unless you like signaling that you don't know how to finish things.

Good luck.

Looking for some tips/feedback to be successful w hotwives and older women on here. I'm 23 yo, in college and endowed.