Tips for better profile

Stepping in to send a Philly Yooooo to the good looking guy on the Island. Lots of great suggestions so far - wow - they’re all great, all necessary, and I see you’re still a work in progress and making changes; awesome and stars on the refrigerator to you for following good suggestions and staying open minded. Everyone here wants you to succeed and have more sex with others and after all the great comments and advice you’ve garnered so far, my comments are short and simple.

I like an expression of trapped innocence in one or two of your pictures, but not a complete gallery. Brooding looks make men seem mentally and physically stronger while smiles demonstrate happiness and better breeding potential because friendly smiles make women smile back. A collection of contemplative expressions makes me think about therapeutic medication levels, out bursts, and other behavioral issues when the genuine quality of your softness shows through in your pic with your snapback and your bro’s - IMO.

Along that same line, show me, tell me, give me some fun facts about you and your life; I see none! That's a red flag in my head when I see more pictures than sentences. "to meet some new people and have fun” does not let me relate to the kind of fun you have in mind, like <Company and conversation on my Wednesday night workout sessions is a plus.>> or <<I’m regular and punctual and would be your lover the same way.>>, or <<I live the movies, fishing, growing bamboo, baking tall cakes with sugar free icing, or grooming Cocker Spaniels>>. Someone will eventually relate to your fun

Leave-in the fuck-me handyman pics VelmaandShaggy writes about, bulk up your thin narrative like GoodGollyMsMolly says, and so show me your smile, you laughing and some of your ideas about fun.

Hi. I see you've added photos. The first one is great, the rest of them not so much. The bro look, particularly with an unsmiling mien, is not going to get you laid. Since that's the point of the exercise, how about photos of you only, not your friends, and smile. Extra points for getting those photos of you doing interesting things.

This feels like deja vu all over again. I haven't seen this particular request, but I've seen this profile, or at least a close approximation, sometime before today.

Start with your tagline. One sentence only, please, and maybe something a little less lazy than either of the two of the sentences you have there now (not saying you're lazy, just that boys just wanna have fun and YOLO are kind of clichés and you can do better).

In Looking For, Velma is right. You're not the boss of other people's schedule, so it would be a good idea to take the once a week thing. Feel free to use the word "regular," though. Use that section as well to talk about who you're interested in meeting. I know you have couples and women selected on your toggles, but say a little more about that. You've selected your age range as 18-99, which is great, but it makes me curious about what you're actually looking for.

Your Description is light too. I'm not sure you need to mention your tattoos, but I would like to know more about you than what you have on your profile.

Velma has addresses Fantasies in a way that I think improves on your wording. Maybe say something about any experience you have too.

In Additional comments, I'm fine with the mention of toys, but you do need to know that by focusing on oral and toys you join the ranks of men who mention those because they're not so reliable with erections. So, maybe recast what you have so it doesn't sound like those are the only things in your arsenal.

Anyway, if it sounds like I hate your profile, I don't. It just needs work and some more information.

Good luck.

Some more things. You need to totally rewrite your profile. I would suggest staying away from some topics.

By regular I mean at least once a week or more.

You don’t get to dictate this. Seeing this is a major turn off.

I guess every guys fantasy is to be with 2 women at the same time. I will like to have 3 ?? lol.

We can make this stronger. Don’t ever say LOL. When you do, it’s like back pedaling and it’s beta as fuck. I have more respect for a man who tells me what to do and sticks with it than one who tries to be Alpha and tacks on an LOL.

Try his:
Every guy’s fantasy is to be with two women at the same time. I prefer three.

BOOM. Take out your big fuckkng dick and mic drop that son of a bitch. Does that sound more alpha than what you wrote?

I love pleasing a woman orally

Careful. I usually interpret this as “I can’t get it up so here’s your consolation prize.”

Bring out the toys.

I don’t like this line either. It makes me think you have toys and have used them on other women... so now I’m thinking: “are they clean?” Take it out.

If nobody else replies i’ll Try to write more later. Got to get back to work.

Couple of things.

The first picture is amazing, the other two... not so much. You kind of seem like a bro in the second pic, and you have a double chin in the third. Never, ever take a selfie looking down at the camera. Nobody looks good like that.

I think I can position you as that contractor that you fantasizes about fucking when your husband wasn’t home. I want to suggest two pics. I’d like you to go to the gym and have a friend take a picture of you shirtless doing the military press. Then I want a friend To take a picture of you working shirtless. I don’t care if it’s in your own house- you seem like the kind of guy who owns tools. You probably have a deck. Maybe... if you have a tool belt, wear the tool belt and jeans and have someone take a pic of you shirtless drinking lemonade from a glass - like you were working on the deck and the wife brought you lemonade. Trust me on this.

You are going to feel self concious asking a friend to take that pic, do it anyway.

Looking for tips and advise for better profile. Being a single male in this lifestyle has it challenges.