Thoughts

Phoenix, AZ, Us

With only one exception, I like the changes. I think your profile now gives a better picture of you and makes you sound appealing, normal, and interesting.

The exception is the section that begins "I am not here to fill" and ends with "reaching out to me." You already imply those things in the previous sentence and going further sounds both prescriptive, which won't go over well, and bossy. Plus, it doesn't take much insight to note problem areas in a couple's relationship. It's usually obvious in the first 10 minutes, which then gives you the option of excusing yourself with thanks.

Other than that, a few minor quibbles, mostly about grammar. In the second sentence in Looking For, lose "will." It makes the sentence stronger. I want you to remove the section it's in anyway, but if you don't, please don't use "lol" in your profile. Semi-formal language is better and I'm already ignoring the emoji, because this is one of the few times that I think it's appropriate. ;-)

In the sentence about kissing, there's a comma between "giving" and "etc." You plan not plain to stay disease free.

That's pretty much it. Nice work!

Virginia Beach, VA, Us

hats and sunglasses are killers of photos

I think this depends on the context. If you are at the beach, out hiking, or in Egypt, hats and sunglasses are fine. I think it has to contextual to the picture. If it's your only picture, then that is bad. But if it's being used to complement other pictures and show you doing interesting things, then it's fine.

Phoenix, AZ, Us

Hi. I like almost everything about your profile. I think you need a few photos that show your full length in clothes and I'm not wild about the close up that you have (great looking photo of you, but it fills too much of the frame).

Here are the things I think need work: Judgmental only has one "e," when you say you've just recently become open to exploring and your profile is more than a year old, it raises a bit of a flag, so maybe change that wording, and in Additional comments, I think you can leave out the first sentence and the "Rest assured." Removing the first sentence keeps all negativity out of your profile and doesn't remind people that single men have a bad reputation, plus it's just kind of a low point.

I would like to see at least a hint of your dry humor, something more than calling yourself an American Joe, but like I said, I quite like your profile as is. The other thing I'd suggest is raising the age limit on your profile a bit. Women will appreciate it and you won't notice the extra two or three years.

Good luck.