Suggestions please?

Thanks njny, yeah break is over. Trying this again. I see you still have great legs! ;)

Thanks Lkydog

Your additional comments section looks like a household “to-do” work list and not too sexy. If you have to make a list, leave your sexy fun words like Flirt, Tease, Laugh, Play pool, try new things and orgasm and think of a few more things we like about single men, like courteous, punctual, attentative, clean shaven, open, funny, and secure. I also think laying the words sideways, in a horizontal line, so they look like they’re in a sentence, makes them sexier and gets rid of the to-do list format

Thanks Ms. Molly. I appreciate the input.

Now, now. Being defeated before you start is not the right attitude. Swinging as a single is tough enough without undermining yourself.

In Looking For,. you've devoted most of the real estate to talking about yourself. That goes in Description. Looking For is for describing who you are looking for, kind of what you'd like to do with them, and what you're hoping to get out of the contact.

Before you move the misplaced information down to Description, think carefully about touting your oral skills. It's kind of axiomatic (there's even a thread) that men who brag about their oral prowess are compensating for a lack elsewhere. Also, at your age (or, really, any age over 21), you're expected to be good at it. Say more about yourself, because you are just as unique as everyone else and that individuality is what makes you stand out from other men. Maybe turn that list in Additional comments into a paragraph or two? Oh, and if by clean you mean disease free, say so. We all kind of assume that people who show up wanting to fuck us have showered and you don't want to introduce any doubt that you have to make a special effort to get to that point.

In Fantasies, make that a complete sentence and then maybe say more about what you would like to do at some point.

In Additional comments, since that list belongs up in Description, this might be a good place to offer yourself as a toy. Or, really, anything that gives information and ends on a light note.

Also consider lightening up your tagline. It's a little ponderous right now.

Your photos lack some pizazz, but there's a dog and I love dogs, so I have nothing more to say.

Good luck. Feel free to check in whenever you've collected enough information to start making changes and want a review.

I know, I'm a single male smoker so I'm pretty much screwed anyway, but does anyone have any suggestions to make my profile better?
Thanks
Scott