Hi. Since this is your second go-round, you know how this works and that it's about your profile. Good. Also, I'm really blunt.
So, first, you have way too many photos in your public galleries. I suspect one is a duplicate of the other, but even so, you really don't need 11-18 photos, most of them similar. Yes, you have a nice face, but however many selfies you have is too many if I couldn't get through them even to offer a critique (not a critic).
Your age range from young enough to be your child if you waited until your 30s to reproduce to 10 years older isn't a great look. Feel free to reject anyone you feel is too old, but you might want to switch that a bit in order to avoid being something of a cliche'.
Your tagline mistakes the meaning of a tagline, which is to invite people to open your profile rather than to give them all the information they might need. Plus, your punctuation and capitalization is wrong. Try something shorter and without typos.
Looking For is fine, but it's really all about you rather than who you're looking for. I think if you lose the first paragraph, start with the second and somehow wind in that you are looking for sexy singles and adventurous couples, you'll be good. The rest of what you have in that paragraph is repeated elsewhere, so you aren't losing anything.
The idea is to give people an opening to see themselves in what you're looking for, so this part is better when it's largely about those others.
In Description, if you remove the boasting - "wet panties guaranteed" and "expert level sexting" for example - you won't lose anyone who is turned off by the way you write your own report card and it won't affect anyone who isn't. Similarly, don't tell what your photos say about you, because it's a definitive statement that isn't true for everyone.
Not sure what the !! is, but I'd lose it too. Also, separate all your paragraphs with a blank line.
The rest is a lot of words, but I suspect that's an accurate reflection of your personality. Just make some deletions and then read it through to make sure it sounds right.
In Fantasies, could you turn that information into a paragraph instead of scattered sentences? Also, it's you're not your in "if you're into that" and "dirty" is not capitalized.
In Additional comments, you have useful information, but it doesn't really end on a high note. Cleanliness is pretty much a given (most adults shower regularly), flexible is not capitalized and I'm kinda thinking that sentence up in Description - When we play, my focus is on..." followed by "Delight in exploring..." would be a better way to end, so maybe trim up what you have and add those two sentences at the end?
Good luck. I'm glad you're already getting some interest. I think you'll get more if you further refine your profile.
