Requesting CC- Round two!

Well thanks everything who took the time to read and comment.

Looking For is easily the biggest problem. It's the largest chunk of text in the profile, but you never actually get around to stating what you're looking for. Plus of course, it's a sea of negativity.

A quick digression on negativity. I understand why folks do it and I'm somewhat sympathetic, often times it's directed at real problems brought up by people who contact you (like no photos, not reading the profile, being out of your preferred age range or gender etc). But the jerks who contact you aren't going to be deterred by the negative demands, and the non-jerks who might be otherwise interested in you are often turned off by the negativity. It's self-defeating. So while it might seem counterintuitive, purging anything that might be thought of as negative in your profile is actually going INCREASE the number of eligible and willing play partners you attract.

I don't exactly remember your earlier attempt but there is very little about who you are looking for in Looking For and very little fantasy in Fantasies. Telling others what to do when contacting you isn't exactly welcoming - especially when you yell in all caps. Description isn't too bad. And the warning in Additional Comments just makes me laugh and wonder how gullible you are about other things.

So this is probably a one step forward - two steps back situation.

And all the earlier comments about your pictures still stand - but I understand that getting new pictures takes more effort than re-writing your text. But since you are looking for couples and single ladies you really need to get a good picture of him or of the two of you together posted asap.

Hi. Your profile is even more about you and less about others than the first iteration. At this point, it's pretty clear that's a feature and not a bug.

It will eliminate a wide swath of personality types, but nobody is for everyone.

Good luck.

The first thing that struck us was negativity in the looking for section. And that start just sticks with us for the entire profile bringing it down and meaning we would likely just pass you by.

We know you said not to comment on the pics. But we have to agree with PP - no pics of him would also force us to just pass you by.

I have found that If there are no pictures of the male half, it’s because he doesn’t look like my husband or chezde . So... that ain’t doin’ you no favors.

You would be an automatic veto to me Because like I said if there’s no pictures of the male,it’s usually for a really good reason.

The profile text is also eye rolling where you have the legal notice. That legal notice doesn’t do a goddamn thing. Take out the legal notice it makes you look like a noob.

I re-opened my private section to you to show you the kind of pictures that you should have.

Honestly-you’re wife is probably hot and fit enough that you don’t need pictures of the guy. You won’t fuck everybody but there’s plenty of people with hot wives and out of shape husbands so if you don’t change your pictures at all you’ll be OK As long as you stick with the couples that don’t have any pictures of the male.

Hi all, back again with a revised profile. Please focus on only the text aspect- we haven't had time to address the photos yet.

Thanks everyone for your CC last time! Please let us know what you think this time around.