Request a profile review

Thanks for the advice.

I may not hate your profile as much as MsMolly does but I find it very off-putting. Some of that is my bias - I love MFM. So take all this with several grains of salt. ;-)

Probably not the effect you're going for but to me you sound like an arrogant sex toy. Some of that will go away if you eliminate much of the discussion in Fantasies. Perhaps just explain that you prefer enjoying the ladies alone while not minding a voyeuristic husband. And how do the husbands fit into the lasting friendships you hope to make?

Things like fit and attractive should be left unsaid - let us make that determination on our own from your pictures. Personally I think hung and classy don't really work well together in the same sentence. I generally assume that most guys have equipment adequate for the job at hand and anyone looking for something in particular will ask or want to see pictures. Non-smoking is covered in your stats and most adults that play are going to be discreet and hygienic. So I'd probably eliminate that entire first sentence. After separating attractive ladies from working on your Mustang you could expand on the other activities mentioned. What sort of live music and movies do you enjoy? Are you taking pictures of scenery or wildlife?

And as MsMolly noted a few things would fit better in other sections so you have a bit of rearranging to do.

You include swimming as something you enjoy - a beach or pool picture is much "classier" way to show off your body than a nude torso selfie. Velma has already mentioned the other two types of pictures that most women will want to see - doing fun things and dressed nicely (so they know how you'll look when meeting for the first time). Remember to smile, watch for clutter and visual chaos in the background and avoid selfies.

Good luck and have fun!

~Phoebert's Wife

Hi. If you've looked at any other threads in this section, you know the advice given is often bluntly phrased. It can feel uncomfortably pointed. It is kindly meant though, and the purpose is to smooth out and bumps between you and what you want. Please keep that in mind.

And that disclaimer is longer than usual because I haaaaate your profile and it's taken some time (seriously, I looked at it hours ago) to regain my objectivity and pick apart the components of that.

So, first, please put some clothes on. Yes, you have a good body, so a torso shot is a good idea, but it's also just like every other good body on so many other profiles. But nobody else dresses like you or carries his body like you, so emphasize your difference rather than your sameness. Have someone else take those photos and the crop for anonymity.

We like what we like, but young enough to be your child to seven years older is in creeper territory, so bring your lower age up. I solemnly promise that it won't discourage a single teenager.

Taglines should be short and preferably clever. They're meant to draw people in rather than to give capsule descriptions.

As far as your text, I'll get to specifics in a moment, but first, do not overuse words. "Fit" is fine once,. "Classy" is meaningless at any number, plus it's a little wince-worthy for several reasons. Figure out what you mean with that word and say that instead. If you vary your language instead of hitting the same beats, it will make for more interest.

In Looking For, your first sentence is awkwardly constructed. How about: I'm here to meet attractive single women, hotwives and vixen... instead? You'll still have to deal with your disinterest in MFMs later, but this sets the parameters subtly.

In Description, your first sentence is either really, really long or it's missing appropriate punctuation. And while you might enjoy working on attractive women, it's probably best not to group them with cars. So eliminate that quirk of the English language by putting them first and then saying you like to work on your capital M Mustang.

The I travel... sentence goes in Additional comments.

Right now, Fantasies is written in such a way that only cuck couples would be interested. I think I see what you're trying to do, but it's at the core of why I hate your profile. You are positioning yourself as the provider of satisfaction and while that's the outward face of cuckolding, it has nothing whatsoever to do with hotwife or stag/vixen. And it's debatable that it's true for cuck couples, except in the moment you're helping them enact their fantasies.

Try rewriting this section so that it isn't disrespectful of other men.

I hope you make revisions and then come back for a review. Go for likability and confidence rather than cockiness and condescension, which will make you less of a niche player.

Good luck.

I think that stuff one is you need to put some clothes on.

Add two more pictures-one of you in a suit or dressed nicely like you’re going out on a date. And do a second picture of you doing something interesting like rock climbing or running a 5K.

Hello everyone, new to SLS but not new to the lifestyle. After browsing the forums, I see that a lot of SM's get their profiles reviewed by the couples here. I'd like to request one as well. Have a great evening!