Profile update and rewrite

ItsMrFlexMember
Old Bridge, NJ, Us

Thank you for the critique Probert’s wife! And yes you are correct I did go through this before. I rewrote my profile to try and bring across my personality a little bit more. Yes to a fault I do add more detail that what’s necessary, old habits die hard sort of speak. Guess it my meticulous attention to details. Thanks again for the review. -Flex

Fort Payne, AL, Us

You've been through this before (your profile name sounded familiar so I checked your posting history) so hopefully you remember that everything said is about your profile and not you personally.

Why do you have one of the silly warnings at the end of your profile? It's been two years since several of us told you that the warnings are useless urban legends that make you appear gullible. I'd also delete the line with your age/height/marital status - all that info is in your stats and it just means you have to remember to make changes in two places.

You tend to get into a bit more detail sometimes than is necessary for your profile - especially about your scheduling limitations. But most of the rest of your text is good - your personality comes through very nicely.

Your pictures are OK - it would be better if you were smiling in the one that is cropped rather than blurred. Even when you blur or crop out your face you should be smiling - it makes a difference in your whole body.

Good luck, have fun and stay safe!

~Phoebert's Wife

ItsMrFlexMember
Old Bridge, NJ, Us

If someone can be so kind as to review and critique my profile. Your honesty and candor would be very much appreciated.